The Observers of the Celestial Veil - Reviews

Destroying a mountains because my favorite characters die..... hahahahahshah???????????????? that's what would happen when a God is into anime.

trash mc's a moron, the vr game is also trash, it will only give you i hunt this monster, it gives exp now im level 300 blah blah blah most of the game part is skipped and only tells his level, the city name, some monster name thats it, there's not even an npc, no quest either he just grind kills monster then max level trash

I’m really disappointed, the author stressed so much how his protagonist would start from the bottom and would have to strive to improve in both and personality, but he is still the same the same OP MC. Even if he starts from the bottom he doesn’t struggle at all, he is the most talented of all that given time will easily surpass everyone else. The author says that he is weak-willed and indecisive, but he never acts like that, even if force by the circumstances still he never acts indecisive, he immediately works his ass of. The author says one thing, but the MC’s actions say another one. I’ve read only the first part before quitting because it was so disappointing, the author rants about something and then does the same thing. The MC never fails, easily obtain everything and his psychological development is poorly executed, he changes from weak-willed to iron-willed way to easily. And even if there is some whining in his thoughts, it is never reflected in his actions.

I wish I could give the writing quality more than 5 stars. Stylistically it’s one of the best novels I have read on this platform. The form and structure is also well defined. The dialogue flows, and the world building doesn’t feel like exposition, which honestly makes it already the top 10% in the originals.The characters aren’t just some cutouts and have their own quirks and habits. The background is well established and makes sense based on their personalities. I also really like the Main leads sister.The only thing is that I feel the characters, especially the Mc, are a bit too normal. I like Characters that are more expressive. However this is just my personal opionon and won’t affect the review.The story development, albeit slow, is very steady and we can already expect a lot of future events due to to foreshadowing. The MC has a clear motivation, and it’s is explained why he acts the way he does.I’ve only read until Chapter 6 but I plan on going further. The novel is definitely one worth checking out. Since even for someone like me, who is not too don’t of Sci-if, it can be enjoyable.

interesting and captivating and draws one to read more

nice, it's really captivating. keep up the good work.

「fuhyaa!?」

"Sorry Alyssa, are you alright?"

???: "Toodles~ I should go now, lunch break and whatnot. Be back later when you're dead to pick up your soul~"

'It seems I have no choice but to join the hestia familia' Touru thought.

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I jump into the hole. I turn upside down with my head falling. When my feet hit the bottom I start to walk the left pathway. And yes Hell is upside down. I walk till I see the throne room, the only reason I was able to walk the left pathway is that I am a high ranking demon, the Demon Princess. Only my older brothers call me Princess because they know I don't like it. Others call me the Cold Queen or they call me the Slayer. I am very proud of these names because I got it through hard work, blood, sweat, and tears.