The Nightface - Reviews

Yeah a sports novel! I liked the first chapters. The system seams a bit boring at the moment, but I'm sure that it will be expandet with new functions and stuff.

I just want to know is this dead ? How long is your break ? I don't remember how long ago I read this... good stuff but I already forgot everything, and I had such high expectations, this was fun and entertaining. But I want to know if it's really a break or did you drop it? Because it feels like I've been waiting for ages. I had even forgotten about this book ... but I saw it again by luck strolling to the bottom of my library. Does anyone know if something happened to the author ? Hopefully he's alright even if he dropped this... and thanks in advance ?

This isnt the worst book in the world, but its incredibly difficult to read if youre a native english speaker or if you have reached that level of speech, if the grammar and writing is improved i might give it another shot, but right now it is not good enough to keep me reading

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Love this story. It is progressing well and I am always waiting for the next chapter to be posted on pins and needles. Keep up the good work.

An interesting take on the now common isekai genre. The main character seems lackadaisical about his current scenario even though he has literally been uprooted from his entire reality by listening to a random stranger.  It is a little bit immature but I am looking forward to how far it can go.

My first issue with this story is the COMPLETELY UNPROFESSIONAL TRANSLATOR. This translator like to delete chapters that do not fit his moral requirements. The readers are often confused do to missing critical plot points. In my opinion this is the worst thing a translator can do. Their job is to translate the story, not to create or edit. I like this story, but there are problems with the World Background. I lot of things are improbable or completely unexplained. For example, the MC is a genius Armsmaster. However, there is no real description of this magical profession. We are only told that the MC knows how to assemble and disassemble machine guns and other modern artillery. So naturally she can assemble magical components as well...

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"You think you're the only ones who have powers?" Cristina asks proudly. "You forget I can do something like that. Now give me time for the other one…."

After she checked his wounds and changed his bandages she looks at him, "Listen don't do something like that again... You're lucky that you didn't get killed." Tyrus looked away, "Not like your my mom... Why do you care." She grew angry and grabs his shirt and pulls him into a kiss then pulls back, "That's why." She whispers and then stands and walks away leaving him both shocked and unsure of what he should do next.

Well I'm putting my heart back together,

Hermione's eyes lingered on the huge bulge on his groin area for a moment before she stood up, a red tint crept on her cheeks. Ivan didn't notice her gaze though.