THE NEW BORN - Reviews

Great book!! Keep it up Author

As a big fan of horror, most horror novels and mangas has left me dissatisfied. This caught my eye while I was randomly scrolling through my suggestions, and from the first chapter, I sucked right in. I read chapter after chapter not wanting to stop. Sometimes I haven't even eaten breakfast, and when I'm finally giving my self a rest, lunch has already past?This is LITERALLY the only novel that I have this much interest in.Time flies fast when you're reading a good book!(novel)

Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right? surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not....Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them. As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem)...Take care guys and be safe.peace;

Gosh dang it! I need a Lily in my life. She is so adorable that you can’t help but want to spoil her and love her. She is, as you say, perfect! I wasn’t sure how I would like this story, but I love it! Damian needs to marry that girl!

A very nice story, need some more chapters to really judge but all in all a good novel. But seriously need more chapers, way more, MORE CHAPTERS

Genel olarak anlaşılması ve okunması kolay ancak biraz anlam karmaşıklığı bulunuyor ek olarak yazının konusu çok hızlı değişiyor bir yeri okurkan hemen konu değişiyor örnek olarak canavar öldürürken bir anda simya yapmaya geçmiş oluyor.

Pleasantly surprised by how good this was.................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................

The Story and progression is very good. Including some more details will be good (but this is my opinion).I hope author continues to write this story :D , as I saw many authors in similar genre have abandoned :'(

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The story has reached chapter 850 and the FL has not been chosen yet. I also don't want Esme to be the FL because I don't like elves and she is also annoying to me.

The author is evaluating his own work. Truly, how it should be.

She actually… killed someone?