The Mystic Empires of Ayan - Reviews

Good fan fic its a world hoping novel so its even betterWriting is okey there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but very rarelyOverall good novel author is not in a hurry to introduce big or OP world right at the beginning, it starts slow at least the first and the second worlds but it is starting to pick upGood luck

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Honest Rating 4.At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest pointsAlso grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.With that being said I think this

Really really really horrible translation here. It is so bad that I can not even properly enjoy the novel at all. As a translator myself I would like to comment:Do the translation properly, no half-assed attempt where you combine chinese and english and pinyin and whatnot altogether into an amalgamation of rubbish.You are letting down the author, the novel, the readers and the face of the Chinese-translating community with a substandard translation.

Good book straight up fire best novel ive seen some translation issues but that’s it I hope you can make the chapter update more though but that’s the only problem I have good luck author????????????????

Its fun, very entertaining and has a bit of slice of life genre. Its a good novel for passing out time relaxing and that though its kinda boring in some parts that i cant explain it lacks something that i cant express in words.

When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories

Just want to read 10 minutes but story was good so I want to read more ?

Before Enzo left for the practice grounds, he told her that this lake possessed a calming effect on the mind, thus it would be beneficial to meditate there as it would help with finding one's core.

oh yeah? i thought it was sabrina, serapham or Symptos

WHERE ARE THE RESTRAINTS!!

I'm slowly getting closure.