The Moonflower Promise - Reviews

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A chance encounter with Q results in the crew of the Enterprise switching personalities and abilities.  Picard is now obsessed with honor, Worf is a neurotic scientist, Wesley is a mature and levelheaded counselor, and Q himself is exploring his newfound humanity.  But while the rest of the cast explore their new emotional and physical natures, trouble is brewing in Engineering, as a malevolent consciousness has awoken in the now Omnipotent Data.

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Hello dear readers,I wanted to write a comment after 3 years to update y'all on things that have happened and why I decided to stop progressing with this novel.When I started this novel I was going into high school and wanted to do this as a side project to hopefully earn money (which didn't work out). By the time I got to around 30 chapters in I was losing interest in being an author because I had found a group of friends and most of my time was spent playing games and going through school. While I have graduated high school; I don't believe that I will have the free time with the upcoming semester of college. Maybe one day I will pick it back up and be able to write a grand story for you dear readers, but I'll be going through rigorous classes at college while I pursue a Bachelors in Computer Science and won't have time since I'll be preoccupied with studying and the gym.I'm sorry to have let y'all down and hopefully can understand my situation. I appreciate the kind comments on some chapters that I've received over the years and I hope that y'all go on to do some amazing things. Just remember to keep your head up and follow your heart.With love, "Devouring Immortal's" Author.

Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2.Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?

Really enjoyable read, not especially complex but the character moments are endearing and the details are great. Some errors with the grammar and the like, but not nearly as bad as it could be. Only complaint is the repeating chapters starting at ch. 129, which I asked about on the discord. Very impatient to continue reading, which I think attests to the quality of the story itself

I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story?Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it.Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background.Should read this one!! 10/10

Now only The Cracker remained on the floor, all bloodied.

Good luck!                                           Start before 9:30

Well it isn't that far apart but, it's comparable to sun and moon at lease. But he wasn't going to run away. He look at the skeleton with his poker face as if he didn't care his killing intense, but he was sweating behind his back.

I stood up and the next thing I saw was a big monster .

[When you gain a skill  you will see this  my watch suddenly glowed purple and two beeps were heard for transformations you will see and hear this My watch glowed gold  and two beeps were heard