The Mona Lisa Pounced On Me - Reviews

I was really enjoying this novel! But it seems like it's been dropped by author, which is really a shame! Honestly I don't like the author's other works, I have zero interest in op simps who spend their time building harems. (If that's your thing cool but it's not for me lol) Tbh I'm mostly upset I'll never get to see MC finally use his stat points (on intelligence!) it's really bothering my OCD ? Wish author had continued this novel instead of their other novels but oh well ?

it said 10days before he transmigrate but it takes around 200+ chapter before it happened, the author pretty much forget his plot and just concentrate on the part before he transmigrated

I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!

Hi, I'm new here so idk but here's my two cents..The progress of the plotline is too slow. Honestly I come for the BL, but I can't even see who the pairing is, what will be their chemistry, when will they meet (if ML is not one of those characters you introduced already), how they appearance is like...Well, I thought it would be Bai Chang, since I like bromance lol, but nah.. idk you'll make it that way, and everything is still so vague.I keep going because I wanna see the BL in the setting you've created.. but so far I only get the setting... at slow paced, and no sight of romance ever happening.. I wonder where is the supposed romance in the BL category.It lacks the giddiness, the events, and even Bai Cong himself is quite vague, yes he's not emotive and too mature for his age, but the way you narrate it make it even more so.Nevertheless, I look forward to new chapter to see any developments in the BL area... Wanna see progress so bad.

I like how the story develops but the lack of chapters is saddening. I will keep supporting it though just to make the author update more chapters.

So I gotta admit I did not get the reference the author made towards my original review, but deleting a review after 1-2 months, like why?Yeah my review wasnt a fake 5* one but cmon I didnt think censorhip would be thang here. I think it was a perfectly decent review with no insults or other baseless assumptions.Back to the review in Tldr form:First~dozen chapter only!Many 1to1 copies from well known manga which indicates laziness.A rather young way of writing which is rly a matter of taste for everyone themself.Story so far very one dimensional "dang isnt here supposed to be X?" "Look there is X!"In the beginning I thought stamina would be a repeating problem for the mc it seemed to have vanished almost immediately, kinda sad I thought it was an interesting concept where they rly had to manage their stamina consumption well.If you feel like deleting again, dont worry I wont write another review. Im lazy too after all :D

     Points: 75

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James instantly said to himself, "YESSSS!"

"Well, that rude guy over there didn't tell me his name. He just told me that I'm-a-friend-of-the-neighbor-of-this-unit" I tried mimicking the way he talked to me awhile ago. "He even snatched back the box he already gave me!"

"Hell Hound " said the Boss, then looking back at Raven "there's more some one else has it " he said with a frown but there was a sort of rage in them "who has it " said Lileth the Boss looks at her "you my remember the girl from the arena ". Then a knowing look appeared on Lileth's face "she has it " she looked at Raven to see a face of rage and fear "Alexa " he said and then stormed off  he was heading towards were he parked his car when Lileth reached him "go away hop scotch "

However, Mana was now blankly staring at him with dull eyes that seemed deep like an abyss. which scared him a little but then he remembered that Mana was just a cripple which made him feel slight anger and hatred. he lashed at Mana with few words and left the room.