The Missing Heirloom - Reviews

Sign webnovel can you pick better novels so they have a chance to shine instead of the millionth near similar idea done again? Another beast taming with the mc able to buff them up yawn.

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While I can't deny that there are some of the usual cliches for the modern cultivation genre, this story has enough twists on them that it manages to differentiate itself.Unlike a lot of the genre, this MC doesn't have a system, and doesn't need to cultivate after being reborn. He's strong from the start with just some one paragraph throwbacks to what allowed him to develop whatever skill he's using to get through a situation.He seems a bit arrogant, but in general it only comes across that way due to his blunt language. He's a country boy who has overinflated goals, but doesn't see why that's a problem since it just makes sense to him when he has the ability to achieve them. He sees it more as he's not the weird one, the city folk are the ones who don't get it.Granted the whole "city folk are just weird/crazy/complicated/arrogant" shtick will probably get old, but it wasn't quite overbearing, at least for the duration of the trial read.And the story is funny enough so far to have gotten a few chuckles, and at least two seriously laugh out loud moment.The main issue I could see from the trial read is that the early chapters are pretty loose and lighthearted with all the bumpkin-ness, but toward the end it starts getting a little... dark. Oddly enough the real laughs were in the later chapters as well, but as you learn about the MC, you realize he's still definitely a bumpkin, but he's not all fun and games, just mostly.

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I really like the story . I can say that the story very good the background and characters are also good.

Panembahan Tanah Putih and Mahesa Wulung themselves never thought the effect of the clash of flute rhythms, that was enhanced by Wind Insight could be so great. Gangsiran, which seems to have not been perfect in Stone monument stance, was forced to close both of his ears because he could not bear to hear the rhythm of the rhythm the flute that collided to each other.

The system went silent and didn't respond, which further aggravated Jayson, who was on the brink of screaming. A flash of gold fur interrupted his soon to be tantrum, and brought his and everyone else's attention toward the bed.

Just 500+ chapters? That's pretty rare for a c-novel! Now I'm excited to read it and The story premise is cool too! FL trying to attract males but end up getting female fans? ??