THE MESSENGER OF DEATH - Reviews

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Great story and great character development the world building is simply put amazing it has all the potential to reach the top power rankings Hopefully author doesn't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.

the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.

Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.

and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..

yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.)  

After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...

Thank you ??...

signed: shameless/crazy author...

he's first described to be calculative  and apathetic with the exception of his first love. Now its seems like he lacks IQ and is way too immature. he sounds more like a rich brat than a killer whose suffered 7 years.

It started off really good, up until all of a sudden he has multiple personalities which just completely ruins the story. Not to mention how cringy it got once it started.

Let start by saying I dinged the author on updating stability since its been a while since we have had any updates (between chp 292-293I suspect the author went on vacation but didn’t leave a note.  That being said, this book is great.  The character building is top notch.  The fact that the MC has multiple personalities who talk to each other makes their arguments hilarious .  Plus its used as a plot point to explain that while the MC is OP, he cant use all his power at the same time because his personalities are the ones that know how to use a particular power so his personality switches depending on the situation.  Its like have 4 very different  MCs in one.  One is super shy yet blood thirsty to the point where he terrifies the others, one is cold and analytical , another is a flirt and con artist always looking for that next score or scam and then we have our normal hero.
The world building is cool.  I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training.  The biggest plus of this novel is the character development.  You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions.  There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him.  I highly recommend this book.  I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book.  Hopefully my dastardly plan works.

when I first started reading this I wasn't sure it was something I would really get into but I've spent the last few days buying coins just to power read this. the author has created a wonderful multi-layered world (pun intended for those who have read) that has completely captured my interest. I am very much looking forward to reading more of this. Keep up the good work, the_fallen!

Well you've got me as a loyal reader as long as you keep up the solid work! I'm still in early chapters but I'm speed reading my way though and I'm actually loving it! Soon you'll have me pestering for more chapters lol.

This is definitely some novel that you guys should check out. A plus point for the sci-fi references, and a gripping MC to boot.

Writing - its actually pretty good and I like the immense vocabulary of the author for coming up with the best possible words to weave into his sentences and paragraphs. There were little to no grammar pet peeves, which gave me a really pleasant read. I should also mention the mad imagination of this author and his knack for naming things and characters. The Benedictus? I love how it sounds tbh
Characters - they feel raw and engaging, and its great to get a glimpse of their personalities as the story progresses. Its good to know that Alex isn't overbearing like I thought he would be - he's a naughty mofo incognito despite his killer rep, and it was a pleasantly begrudging twist when the truth about Kain was revealed. Overall, I like the depths of the characters.
Development - the pace is really great, and each chapter leaves you wanting for more content, so good job on that
Stability - keep it up
World - this is created an extremely complicated world that requires a lot more vivid imagery and descriptions. There were inconsistencies on this part, but they are hardly noticeable and can be easily corrected too since it was pointed out in some paragraph comments.

In conclusion, this is a book you should give a try ?

Let tell you something in the beginning the Mc was portrayed as the best assassin in the world but in just tow chapters he was like a 7yrs old boy that have a mental illness
Author you just f*cked up your novel it has a lot of potential but you ruin it????

This novel is like an airplane taking off
Getting better by each chapter passing The mistakes that the author made at the beginning are none exsistant

This book is one of the best books out there. The author has a lot of potential and I’m sure with time we will be reading paperback. The character development is top notch, everything about this book is superb. Keep up the good work author?