Firstly, my initial interest in this manga was sparked by its concept, hoping for a light-hearted romantic comedy. However, my experience fell short of expectations. The tone is excessively childish, with excessive jokes that clash with more serious moments, making dramatic scenes feel flat.
The comedy is not only silly but also ventures into controversial territory, attempting to address progressive themes like sexuality, particularly involving a 19-year-old protagonist and his 11-year-old adopted son. While the author may intend to make it humorous, for me, it crossed the line and became overdone. I appreciate the attempt to break boundaries, but there needs to be a balance.
As for the genre, this isn't the slice-of-life rom-com I expected; it leans more towards a comedy adventure fantasy, with a virtually nonexistent romance. The slow development is frustrating, as the characters' platonic interactions are detailed, but physical progress is practically nonexistent. The reliance on the "virgin" trope becomes repetitive and inconsistent, causing character inconsistencies and plot holes.
The shift in direction and character dynamics throughout the series is jarring, as if the author suddenly alters their personalities and reactions. Some plot points are brushed aside, creating confusion. The focus on family dynamics seems forced, with minimal romantic interaction between the main characters despite living together for months.
The author's use of cheap surprises, such as marriage and constant interruptions from third parties, feels manipulative and detracts from the romance. If the goal was to shock readers, it backfires when it's clear the story remains stuck in pre-relationship territory.
Lastly, the author's writing style has issues. Frequent shifts in perspective, often making readers follow uninteresting supporting characters like Gray, disrupt the flow. His portrayal of 11-year-olds can be problematic and naive, leading to repetitive and tiresome narrative. Excessive inner thoughts interrupt the dialogue, making the reading experience akin to a bumpy ride.
Overall, the work could benefit from substantial editing to condense the content, eliminating unnecessary details and streamlining the narrative. As it stands, the excessive humor, inconsistent character development, and overly verbose writing detract from the potential for a compelling romantic comedy.