The Master - Reviews

The author's other book wasn't half bad so i wonder how did he suddenly manage to write this one out of thin air. I would like to use many adjectives to describe it but just know that its a waste of time.

*Puich*

        Pareho silang humagalpak ng tawa at hindi na natigil.

" you want to be a business owner or an accounting?"

"You should try to avoid getting into fights, the teachers will think you're just another bully in the school that only wants trouble." Violet, somewhat worried said to Noah. "You shouldn't worry me so much. Who do you think I am? Your mom?" Violet was mocking him for his carelessness. "I doesn't really matter, at least I saved a beauty today." Said Noah with a big smile.

"Begitulah. Tetapi banyak hal yang tetap sama. Ia memakan Anda, dan Anda membiarkannya. Karena Anda percaya bahwa itulah satu-satunya cara untuk mengendalikan Anda, bukan? Bagaimana rasanya mengetahui kesalahan itu? Apakah satu-satunya hal yang menahan Anda? "Bayangan saya mengejek.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

this is based off and inspired from one piece as it is my favourite , if you love this give me reviews on everything, if this gets enough love we will surely create a manga and go pro on this project

Not to brag but I think this novel is pretty good. Read it if you want to read a story about a guy who is somewhat forced to steal the female protagonists away from MCs of different novels that occurs in that world while also having to defeat the villains of those stories as well.

"Hello, dear readers! This is my first novel and my debut project as an author. I’d love to hear your thoughts: **What tips would you give to improve this story and make it more engaging?**"  ??✒