The Magitek System - Reviews

A strong start, and an intricately-designed system that is not designed to be too cryptic. The way Japan is portrayed is also good enough as a fan of Japanese media myself. Will look forward to what happens next.

I can guarantee this novel is good

it starts off with a banger and slowly introduces you to the main plot. The characters have enough motivation, and the system aspect is just too unique to miss out on.

This novel isn't for me. The MC is stupid with no common sense with a focus on getting revenge. Like every other paragraph MC will say something about revenge. Then every other paragraph MC will talk about why MC didn't get a army or some OP ability for free with no effort when in real life any normal person would not even think about get an army or whatever OP from the start an just be grateful with what they got. I really don't know how this got many 5 star reviews. Though the writing quality is great, while there are many chapters which are long enough to my liking. Still I can't read this anymore.

Amazing! Another story from my most favourite author. It even started well this time. The start for this story is totally amazing.
I like the synopsis too. It's simple and short.
I am looking forward to more releases.

Honest reviews are here..

[Spoiler Alert]
I also started reading the novel after reading this novel synopsis.. Seriously, the synopsis is quite attractive and makes the story seem different from other novel.. But it is not.. In the early chapter, you already feel the rushing of the story..

His parent death.. He got into an orphanage and got bullying some of the guys.. The reason for his bully? Because he is still in shock after the death of his parents, which had happened right in front of his own eyes, and basically, he ignores everyone around him.. And there he meets some girl who is doing to be his loves one..

Then, after a few years, he going to be 18 years old with his loves one and planning their future.. Then, his girlfriend got taken away in front of him, and he can't do anything because of he to weak against yakuza group.. Then, his loves one got r*ped and killed by them..

His thirst for revenge made him awaken the system.. First of all, there is no superpower in this novel.. Only high-tech.. So, I am quite disappointed, which I thought there going to be some superpower, cultivation or anything like that..

The first thing he does is tell the bully on the orphanage.. Well, he got along with that guy after a few years, he lived together on an orphanage.. Then, he also tells his lawyers about his system..

So, the story is quite boringgggg after that.. After reading a few more chapters, I no longer continue the novel..  It really not my cup of tea..

The start is good but, the emotional aspect feels flat.

Conveying the emotions at the start of novel can be a bit tough but, it's a bit more flat.

The story is good but the time gapes aren't separated properly.

When the girl is killed at the start, I can't connect to them.

You can use some more spacing in paragraphs.

Ultimately... it's good.

The syatem is elaborate and very interesting.

A good read for now.

It's a little fast paced in my opinion especially at the beginning. He doesn't have any attachment to his family figures and it seems a bit forced.
The system is introduced too suddenly.

Otherwise it's a very interesting concept. I put it in my library

A dark, suspenseful and well-written story. Every chapter constantly keeps me on my toes, and I can feel the character's pain and  frustration. Best of luck with your story [img=recommend]

I recommend this novel to people who love this genre of novels. The author has done a great job at describing his characters, designing the world, and setting the vibes for each scene. The characters are not doing stuff for hidden reasons that make no sense when they are revealed and I love Mr. Hayashi's dream of his son marrying an idol and the little shrine for TWICE and BLACKPINK.

The writing style is mature and orderly... I like how the author developed his characters and how they react to situations in a realistic manner. Just as the author gave the MC a drive or purpose that will help him grow as a character as the story progresses. The world-building is well-thought-out, and the pace is neither too slow nor too fast... It's perfectly balanced.

The writing style is mature and well organized... I like how the author fleshed out his character and how they respond to situations in a realistic way. Just like how the author gave the MC a drive or purpose that will build his character along with the story.  The world-building is well thought out and the pacing is neither slow nor fast... it's well balanced.

Very good book, it's very cool and interesting. will read more once I get my free time. Really recommend it for people to read (⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)