The Magic Heart - Reviews

Author literally destroyed his own story by not updating anymore. He is still shameless enough to ask for privilege. I haven't read for months but the story is only a few chapter forward where I am currently at. Such a shame.

It starts out fun and entertaining but you should drop it as soon as he begins interacting with other countries. It just goes on and on about how racist and greedy other countries are and how kind, gentle, welcoming, friendly, and generous china is. It felt like the author had a gun to their head and was being forced to write propaganda.

So here I was enjoying this book when all of a sudden the author ended it on the most annoying cliffhanger ever! However it is a good read so I encourage people to read it and bully author-Chan to hurry up and write more. For the readers sanity.....(and author-chans safety). Before he gets kidnapped and forced to write more

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I just caught up with the latest chapter and all I can say is ~~~ This is wonderful ~~~ ! I don't care about the grammar whatsoever. The story is really great and feels so real! The conversation between each character is almost like how I communicate with people every day. I don't see anything forced. Action scene is fantastic .The story building, plot, arc, and the planning of the MC is fantastic and such an eye opener for me. It is unique from the rest of the stories with this kind of theme, so thank you to the author for recommending this work on facebook. I'll continue showing support as long as you make this story interesting. Keep up the good work!

Alright, Author here. I know most of you think this novel is a rip-off of Cultivation Chat Group. Well, to be informed, this novel was in the contest with the theme chat group. And this is the result of that. And please, I know you don't like weak MC but understand that the MC is never a magician to begin with, and does not have any experience becoming one so how could I explain him being able to defeat enemies easily? Cut him some slack because I can't just let him go to a strong individual with some cheat powers because the story would go boring too easily.As for the world-building, I didn't bother explaining where he was located or the current situation because it was set in modern Japan. Nothing to explain too much and I don't bother emphasize it too much since it will just be stocking words with only description of the place and I know many of you hate that.As for the chat group, its a necessary part of the story and it would be one of the key points in the future. As for goals of the MC, it's not yet decided so please wait for a bit. As for the grammar, I know I have mistakes here and there and I know that because I am not a Native English speaker so please tolerate it a bit and if there are mistakes, kindly point it to me. And as always, thank you for reading.

I’ll be cheering you on for your WSA entry, as I can see the potential in this lore. The prologue provides a clear direction and a fine briefing on what to expect from the ‘peak’ experts of this world. The words are easy to interpret, concise, and help the readers to grasp the settings of each scene without having to think too much. The information feedback is just as smooth with little fillers, especially when the characters are mentioned with little snippets of their past, present, and their expectations for the future. This is slowly building a web of information and connections, but if one isn’t careful enough and is simply reading for the sake of skimming through, it’s easy to be lost in the storytelling down the line.

Part II

  Sehun membuka pintu kamar itu. baru saja ia melangkah masuk. Kakinya langsung mematung disana. Menatap yang ada dihadapannya tak percaya. Fotonya terpajang disetiap sudut kamar itu. dari yang terkecil hingga yang terbesar. Ia menghampiri setiap foto itu. Ternyata itu adalah foto dirinya yang diambil secara diam-diam.

her last words

(bleckvido):- tum sab kya baate le kar beth gaye parti ka injoye karo yaar.

A few seconds later, everyone was settled in their seats and an awkward air was created. Not that Eugene seemed to notice or care.