The Mafia Princess’s Bodyguard - Reviews

Is this story made by a single author? It's more like there's a couple of authors here, taking turns doing each paragraph - with only the vaguest knowledge of what each other is doing. This means there's going to be a beauty introduced every chapter. The protagonist's parents are going to be alive the next, and supposed dead for 3 years the next chapter. Oh, his sibling also regularly changes gender and names. This batch of trial-read has been...utterly terrible.

Please add more R18 scenes and don't leave the girls out of action just as in other typical CN novels.Make the girls OP and not just keeping them as beautiful vases.Everything else is so awesome so far :D

You gotta be kidding me? I've read to 1029 chapters and now you're implementing this pay to read system? That is fine and all, cos I'll just wait till its released. But you roll back the free chapters to 130? You really gotta be kidding me, I mean yes I understand its free and really do appreciate your efforts. But this is really ridiculous and you're really just forcing us to drop this novel.

I enjoy reading this book; the plot is engaging, and the main character isn't instantly overpowered, though still strong. While there are some plot holes, no story is perfect. These minor flaws don't detract from the overall quality, and I find this novel thoroughly enjoyable.

This book is just amazing. There are like no words that can describe how good it is. I just want to say I love you author for writing such a beautiful book and I support this book. I totally recommend this book for everyone. I'm looking forward for the next chapter  of this book.?

Love the book so far just wanting to know if it will continue now that the trail period is ending.                                            

Great Novel...I realy like it...Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Vote!140......140.......140...............140........................

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ??

notbad its interesting but please elaborate more. its to straightforward was looking forward to the first cultivator concept not its bad but can be improved (chapter21)  :)

Cough! Cough!

The love her father held for her mother was something that the divorce couldn't absolve, nor the years that passed after she had left. Erin would often feel her heart ache for her father.

"I… was not," Nadran replied in a careful manner.  [Why is she still being so friendly?  Is she just happy because I won her a bet?  If the bet's already over, why is she still interacting with me?  What is she hoping to gain?]