Author really did a good job on ruining Itachi's image. Basically, this is just a story about Yun Che with Sharingan abilities. tbh, this novel will be better if it's really about Yun Che with Sharingan instead of Itachi in ATG world and i will really read it with joy. a shame indeed
Nice synopsis dear Author... it's quite simple yet so captivating. We all as writers have our own writing styles and techniques that can hook our readers yeah????Everything is on point, and I love how you decribe your scenes. Keep it up and you'll earn a fortune ???
A great story , realy well written and so funny ( if you think zombies and blood and gore are funny ?)Sadly the last book is deleated from the author, the story online goes only till chapter ~94 the rest of the chapters are empty. But the story has a closure even if not all questions are answerd.
This book is ONLY a decent beginning of a book. It lays out an interesting fantasy setting and stretches the intro plot on forever. It gives readers the feeling it will become something good, but it never does. If the plot developed, it might be a good novel - That’s a major reason for its success. But as it stands, it’s the nutritionally empty junk food of webnovels. Below is a list of other rambly criticisms:1. The writing is monotone. This is especially noticeable with characters who share speech mannerisms to an alarming degree. It is acceptable at first when everything is new and local, but as international cultures are introduced its nature as a flaw comes to light.2. Character worldviews and attitudes are generic. All characters (even leaders, foreign countries, and “gods”) fall into two sets, “generic beast companion” and “generic humanoid.” These sets govern nearly all tones, mannerisms, attitudes, and thoughts.3. Hundreds of chapters in its still 100% training arc. No real antagonists. Even “wars” against “faceless” giant monsters reads like a training arc.4. The book is padded out to be a “slice of life.” It sacrifices progress (aside from strength increases) for semi-repetitive good-vibe moments. If you buy into the inside joke-like style these scenes might give you a little dopamine rush. Otherwise, it’s incredibly stale and predictable made worse by the monotone voice everyone has.5. Other than the initial sudden twists (like a trial jumping out of nowhere), it’s too predictable.6. Although the world’s mystery was intriguing for a long time, what is revealed over time is less interesting than I had hoped. (This is a common issue with many books where the initial concept the author adopted was obscured by a more interesting concept that never gets fully realized)I’ve rambled enough. I read this a while ago and only reviewed it now because it's been pinned to the top of my library for two days and I’m tired of it.Should you read this book? Maybe. I did once and I don’t anymore. Keep in mind that it’s super junk food and in the end, you will probably be unfulfilled. If you’re fine with that, enjoy the sickly sweet flavor stretching on forever.
The maximum amount allowed has been surpassed for a while. Even so, the semen which had no place to escape forcibly enter the uterus by expanding the inside of Miyako's body
My eyes shot straight up and quickly scanned my surroundings. A blush formed into my face as I realized that I accidentally layed my head on the hooded guy's shoulder! He even had his hand mid-way of reaching out to me as if he was just about to wake me up.
That damn big brother of mine will be here any minute. Splash splash... She continued to splash the water to keep her self busy to mask the nervousness in her body and her mind too. She couldn't speak the words themselves but she hoped he will take the initiative. It had to seem like it's he who took the initiative of subduing her. She wanted him is cultivation essence had to quench the fire in her soul. For her anybody could've done the deed as long as it will help her cross the bridge it will not matter any longer. Little did she know not anybody but a boy virgin with the first of his essence was worthy enough to satisfy her requirements
