The Lost Kingdom Of Maria - Reviews

Your book is lovely nino am proud of you

i don't even read it but alpha male no Harem with this only u get 5 star

?Everybody was kung-fu fightingThose kicks were fast as lightningIn fact it was a little bit frighteningBut they fought with expert timing??They were funky China men from funky ChinatownThey were chopping them up and they were chopping them downIt's an ancient Chinese art and everybody knew their partFrom a feint into a slip, and kicking from the hip?

So far, I gotta say it started off quite well. I mean I didn't get borde within the beginning chapters, but instead became more intrigued as the plot progressed.everything else is also good. There are rarely if not any grammar mistakes or misspelled words and even if there are the author is quick to fix them if you point them out, which is a point in my book.It shows the dedication and passion of the author since he's willing to quick fix any mistake pointed out to him, unlike some other authors who just ignore it or say when I do a rewrite.Over all I rate this book a 5/5 so far. But if it goes downhill later on then I'll retrack my 5 star rating and reassigne a different rating of it then.

Not sure if the story is any good since i cant get it past myself to read things that have bad grammar. Its not the novel itself...its just that its hard to focus on reading when the novel has bad grammarIt doeant even have to be the bestIt just has to be good

Feel good story. Interesting.                                                                                                                                                                                                   

Good quality of writing, but not enough story to say anything else is better than average yet.  OP main character ruins the sense of many things.  Updates are a luxury, and this may well just be a dead story.  Wait for enough updates before you start this.

What's up?

"nothing hurts you anymore ..." - Maciej says in his sleep

"Ara's right. Then tell me, what if someone forcefully takes your favorite toy and locks it up, you are able to see it but can't get a hold of it. What will you do?"

Nice. Gj

"He'll sleep soundly," he predicted.