The Lost Heir's Return - Reviews

Great read, cool MC, lots of adventures. Unusual way to level up with gene development mixed with Cultivation. Anticlimactic ending due to abrupt way the plot was wrapped up.

Devon here, If I want to encapsulate the book, I would say it is heavy on daily life and relationships. I really like the fleshed out world which I tried to implement here.There will be hardships but being a heir of the conglomerate comes with a lot of perks.It leans heavily on slice of life territory but as the story progresses into MC's adult life, more action and spontaneous events will be included. Some people criticized MC for acting like too much of an adult. But because he is an Overpowered character with a knowledge based ability, nerfing him becomes a challenge.I have a solid direction for the book and I hope you will accompany me throughout the whole way.

I only read the first chapter and it bored me to death this book truly isn't interesting!

Honestly can't give a book a good review, if I have to read a sentence 3 times just to understand what the author is trying to say, author just starts using words that seem to have just been decided on the spot, that are actually words, and I have to make a decision whether it's the actual use of that word, or something random and ignore it. If he is going to do that, he needs a damn glossary at beginning. Hopefully someone working on this will give it a re-read and edit and I'd love to pick it up again, and change my review

Mad oh, this story is mad. I was able to conceive exactly what the author is writing Just in chapter 1 & 2.. Nice story development. Dude.. wait let me pay some homage.; Sensei this is a promising story. Keep the **** up.??

i recommending reading it, its quite good mc is not lazy and hardworking and he is doing his bestthough i wish in the future that the mc will make the biggest investment company there is

the short chapter is indeed a problem but it looks and sounds interesting so that a good thing even then I will have to see how this will go. I will give you a 5-star review first before that though consider it a reward for making me interested if you want

Well, I like what I've seen from the book, I dislike the fact that he is a very naive and soft guy, but thank God he changes, not a really cold MC, but knowing that he has to do what he has to do to get the job done. I also like how he's not really OP from the beginning, how he grinds levels to get stronger and I also hope that he and Hana(aka The Ice Queen ?,) become a couple. ????Anyways, so far so good. Great book, with loads of potential

He turned toward Samira and found samira's soul .

In the evening it became cold and chilly. Adarsh took Mini to show her around. Of all the beauty surrounding them, Mini was deeply entranced by the waterfall; she had never seen one in person, and had never even seen pictures of one as deep and large as this one. Mini stood mesmerized, looking at the waterfall, as Adarsh came behind her and started kissing her softly; before they knew it, both of them were kissing each other, when suddenly Mini felt a pull on her leg, felt the ground beneath her give away and the feeling of falling swallowed her. Mini grappled with the air trying to hold on to something when Adarsh managed to catch hold of her hand; one half leaning and the other falling, Mini tried to pull herself up but felt herself falling deeper towards the water. With a strong and sudden jerk, Adarsh managed to pull Mini back to the shore, who fell face down onto the ground with a thud, whereas, with a loud splash behind her, Adarsh tried to swim back ashore, but disappeared into the dark waters. Mini got up with effort, as the throbbing pain in her face and mouth made her groan. Mini shouted at the edge, and kept shouting out for Adarsh, with tears running down her face, till her voice was hoarse, until she lost hope and fainted on the spot. A couple of hours later, Mini woke up in the middle of the night, being lulled by the soft rushing of water and met the eyes of the cat. Mini recalled what had happened, and as tears started flowing again and her throat closed up, she picked herself up and managed to stagger back inside the warm cottage. Upon entering, her eyes cautiously looked around for an Adarsh who would jump out and tease her for falling for the oldest trick in the book, but the house was dark and silent; the fire had died down and no one was there to rekindle it. Mini went to the bedroom, closed the door, and fell down on the bed. She could not help being choked with the feeling that her misfortune had only just begun.

"This is your real purpose, aren't you quite clever. I will not condone you trying to blow the house with you craziness, young master" , sarcastically replied by the butler.

Tik is it possible to let out a single being and not let them all out.