The Lost Devil - Reviews

Shameless review from the author. I know this is not the best of the story out there, but I am trying my best to make it interesting. If you like the story vote for it, write coments and post reviews. I would really appreciate that.

From what I can say after reading 6 chapters is that the story has got potential. The character development is good, the author is trying to make the MC look innocent, not like other novels where the MC is a rogue. The relationship of the MC with his parents caught my eye. Not many stories focus on something like this. I hope you don't drop it and keep up the good work.

If you are looking for a story, with a bit of suspense in the long run, then it's worth giving a try. The thing which got me interested was how he was portrayed as an emotionless killer in the synopsis while till now in the story he is extremely opposite. He is a naive, innocent man because of his memory loss. The other thing worth noting is that unlike other novels, where the MC's parents are dead or just side characters, here I am guessing that they have a role of themselves. Their relationship with the MC is also one of the focal points. Overall if the story is not dropped, it has great potential.

The story is going well and now we have daily updates. The character development seems fine while the plot is somewhat unique. I hope you don't drop it

I can only say, it's good, worth giving a try... Well, the number of chapters is not very much that's the only downfall. Love it hope you update daily.

Well, my review is kind of biased. This guy is a friend of mine so don't take my word when I saw thqt the story is good and it's worth a try. Try on your own and if you like it write a review and if you don't like it then also write a review about the things you are not satisfied with. It's helpful to the writer.

A great read. There are some grammar issues and some paragraphs need some fluidity but everyone makes mistakes. Looking forward to the MC's relationship. A memory-loss MC is a rare catch on this site. I'm looking forward to events that will bring some sort of PTSD symptoms, like when he kills accidentally to protect.

Nice... I like the story. I hope you won't drop it midway....................................................................................................................................................................................................xpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpx.

True it my not be the best novel out here, but it got its own vibe.

I really like your work, I've been voting it not until you post the last chap.

Its really a hidden gem.....Why its not getting enough reviews....more people should read this novel.....maybe because of the stability of updates is low.....since the novel is in its early stages...you need more stable updates for people to get interested in it.... Author you should really keep up the good work and do more updates.....Since the novel is really promising.

worth the time and energy. its a thriller with great deal of info presented nicely. the story flows smoothly and the suspense catches ur interest. great work and dedication. more please

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