The Lost De'Luca - Reviews

Worth reading as a sports fan, objectively could use some help from a storyline point of view. Largely a rinse and repeat of character gets an ability he thinks is useless but winds up creating a huge miracle. I do think the story has gained a bit of depth lately and hope that continues.

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This is a good book but I didn't find it that intresting so I am just giving less ratings, forgive me. I am sorry that your story is getting less ratings!

This story starts off with a good pace but lost traction real quick. He tells his family he’s from the future then he tells his best friend then he gets multiple girls involved like this is just a hearm starting novel so far I don’t want to sit here and read 24 chapters about how he’s going to cultivate and his his friends and family are going to learn magic. It’s so boring reading info dump after info dump. The story is all over the place and the main chars not likable. This novel isn’t for me.

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Interesting so far.  when I saw there were only 9 reviews i wanted to be number 10 and unlock the ranking.

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Without a backward glance Delacroix and Nahmeh walked through the threshold.

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"Memangnya saya mau? Saya atasan di sini jadi sebaiknya kamu dengarkan aturan saya tanpa mengeluh ataupun membantah" ujar laki – laki itu sedikit mengalihkan pandangan ke gadis yang masih menunjukkan  wajah kebingungannya.

Arriving through the 4th floor I walked my way to Emma's work station.

Out of the woodworks, a mocking and strangely sultry feminine voice was heard.