The Lord Of War - Reviews

He was not expecting to have worked her this hard. Sure, they had a couple of rounds, but he had controlled himself. He had held back on her. As it was her first time, he had been merciful. If it were his choice, he would still be in her and not standing so far away from her.

"Thank you!" I said and heading towards office I was thinking what would happen inside.

Embodying the principle of one who did not fight for the sake of one's self, but for the sake of others. A concept known as duty or responsibility?

1. Empire

Pants: Leather pants (Deff: +5)

Back at the rebel side.

"To perform a blood binding with a Demon and not only live but also have no lasting damage, requires nothing less than power, either light or dark." She continued.

It's my first time reading this type of novel and honestly, it's captivating how the Author narrates the story with perfection it is excellent how the author has described the real situation  some of the events were informative Keep up the good work author

It's a good concept from what I've read so far. However it needs deeper world building and character design with more detailed arcs. Some fights were barely a paragraph long and most chapters ended in the same way.

Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.Updating stability is ok.World background is good.All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.