The life of lifeless karashika - Reviews

This novel is a delightful fusion of mystery and compelling storytelling, with an intriguing protagonist and outstanding writing quality. The only flaw is the inconsistent update schedule, but it doesn't overshadow the sheer enjoyment derived from each chapter. Enthralling read!

Such a good story why did it have to be dropped  ??????????????????????.......………….................................lol

Hey, just a note for those of you who want to read. Please read carefully, so that you don't feel disappointed because your time is wasted reading this story. 1. Is this some kind of story with reincarnation or going back in time? No, this story is just about an ordinary guy who discovers that there is a game that can be used to make money.2. Does this story use something like a system? I don't know what kind of system you're expecting, I'm using things you can find in normal RPG games.3. What about the MCs? He's neither good nor bad, I'd like to write him as a realistic human, only doing things that benefit him, but at least he can still sympathize.4. Is there romance? Yes, and because I love it, there's probably a lot of romance in this story. And there will also be more than just the main couple to enjoy in this story. 5. Is there a Harem? No, although I actually like it too, but I don't use it because the setting of this story is still in the normal world. And also I don't want any female characters to get hurt because the MC can only be with one girl. (And to be honest, writing a good and balanced harem is hard.)6. About the plot, there might be some things that are a little strange or don't make sense. But remember that this is just a fantasy story, and it is also possible that you will find a lot of plot holes in this story. So just understand, and I will also try to improve more every time.7. Regarding writing, I admit that I am bad at writing things. Moreover, English is not my first language, and I am still learning it. So if there are errors in writing or grammar, you are free to give criticism or input. Whether you want to criticize bluntly or subtly, I will gladly accept it.8. And also for each chapter, it will contain an average of between 1.300 to 2.000 words.Warm regards,Alkapa

love it its a shame thee is currently only 13 if you could get 1/2 out everyday i would love it its such a good story its also interesting and a good read i would totally recommend people to read

"Prisoners?...yes they would do just fine." Luciforo returned a wicked smile. And my throat tightened, and my chest squeezed tight. My father was in that prison? What did they plan to do? Luciforo led us towards another room as a very thin man was strapped and tied to a chair. He was shaking behind glass doors naked and afraid. The scientist observed and watched him as they tapped away on their computers "You are just in time they are just about to use another subject let's hope this one Is not another disappoint." We watched quietly as a machine lowered to the man covering his head and arms. "What does that do?" Harry asked. "The arm piece has small middles that carry the Nytroraidium and injects it into his blood stream and the helmet inserts the micro chip in his brain. The Nytroraidium will enhance all his senses improve muscle function and pretty much make him super human. Not only that he will be totally and complete under our control with the chip in his brain. Trust me Harry once we succeed in this we will bring this country no…. the whole world down to its knees and rule with these powerful specimens at our fingertips who can stop us?" He laughed, and Harry joined him this was not right this place needed to be shut down how did no one know about this dangerous lab that killed innocent people. Suddenly the man started to convulse and shake as he screamed so loud my body was covered in goosebumps. He screams as all the purple liquid that was in the dispenser was poured into his body. His veins popped out all over his body making him look like a monster as his muscles grew larger and larger in size. Spit and silver flew out of his mouth as he screamed in agony. "You see that Harry its working." Luciforo shouted in excitement. The man screamed and struggled to get free, but he was restrained with straps and metal cuffs. Suddenly he lifted his arm so hard breaking all the straps and cuffs. He broke free through like it was a stand of hairs. He stood up and I was shocked how anyone could get this big he was not he same skinny man moments ago this was a monster with blood shot eyes and covered in purples veins. What is in that Nytroraidium stuff?

"Yes! There is something really important I need to talk with you." Ray talked finally.

"Yes, we do! Don't you see it? That's the only way we can be together freely! If we stay here, stuff like this will happen all the time and it will tear us apart one way or another! And, I don't want that to happen, Jungkookie! I want to be with you forever!"

We all started looking around at eachother.

          Lulu, lulu was a girl in the forest with no parents everyone had followed her into an abandoned two story home she then killed them and took there eyes for a reason I don't know the reason myself one day a kid and his family went on a camping trip in the forest the teenage boy was 14 or 15. Everyone unpacked everything even setting up the camp fire and tents the boy went out into the forest and told his mom he will be right back his mom told him to not go to far out the boy then went to a little water river going down he then saw a girl on the other side of the river sitting down with her feet in the water he called out to her and asked are you ok she didn't respond to him he went near her and asked what her name was she responded "lulu.'' The mist came in and the boy saw lulu go past him lulu asked him to follow her he then followed her and became to complete stop to an abandoned two story house with a basement she asked if he was hungry he replied yes, yes i am lulu got a bowl and made soup and poured some of it in the bowl the boy ate the soup it went down smoothly and enjoyed it, the boy put the empty bowl on the table and then fell asleep on the couch he heard some noises coming from the basement and thought it was nothing he went back to sleep then heard it again he fell asleep again and heard it louder he got up and went in the basement and saw nothing when he turned on the light it was still nothing he went to go see in lulu's room he went in it was dark he tripped on something he turned on the light and was scared to see that there were 10 dead body's hanging from the ceiling he saw lulu behind him lulu said you seen to much now you must die she raised her head and the boy saw no eyes he looked at the body's again and saw no eyes from them he noticed the body's weren't dead they were still alive but lulu had a scoop to take out the boys eyes he didn't make it out of the house in time he was taken and hanged with no eyes and killed later on.

"Well, that's the thing. He doesn't seem to care too much. He more worried about what it would mean for Brave?" Mr. Colin said shaking his head. "Kids the days." He grumbled as he stood up leaving.

John still doesn't understand the situation completely, he was still wondering how the man find out about the sex.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb