The Last Save Point - Reviews

to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very niceCharacter: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..updatig stability: I don't know!world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!

why would you recommend me #harem trash......................................................................................................

The First Two Did This So-Third Review! ???I was kinda of a big fan with Battle Royales of the Sinners, so this novel brought me a lot expectations when I discovered it and...I’m still hopeful that this novel can make it to the top 15 of the new novels being written~~

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The novel is pretty good. It uses the apocalypse genre pretty well and includes a very interesting mystery with the mc.                          

I really loved the movie Ready player one but I never got the chance to read the book it was based on, but hey at least i get to read this one. This is really well written, you get the sense of the world from the words used and I really love your depiction of the Oasis. Its still early days at 7 chapters but so far they are really good. I'll be looking forward to more, good job author

it is a really good book with great pacing (in my opinion) and with good and execptional plot changes that really hook the reader in to read more and more of the story.

reading novel with incubus thing is not really my type but when i read this novel this really hype me up, over all this story was so entertaining and amazing!!!!, i'll add this to my library!! i'm rooting for you dear author!

Just as they stopped to gaze in shock at the unfolding scene, a troop of children ran up, panting. Two Alfan, one male, the other female, stopped to make a head count. Bentham assumed they were all there because they began ushering the young aliens forwards again.

Potential:B

Thinking that he was ready for the task, Jai made his way to the village entrance.

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