The Last Memory Keeper - Reviews

-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story.-The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks.-The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything.-The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class.-The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist.-The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills)-The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing.-No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal.In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it.(And I feel that the novel is written by AI)

Please get a translator to come and translate these novels!! I read this a long while ago and I would really like to catch up on the new chapters!!

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Broken VR Game (the balance, programming, and hardware are all poorly done) + unnecessary (RE:) Time Travel. Then he jumps back into the machine that killed him. I've heard "The MC's actions were unrealistic" before, but I'm not going to read about the multi-Darwin-Award winner. The only reason I flipped through the first few chapters, was that I thought it was Portal Fiction. It's not.

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there is a saying you should be the fan of you first if want to have Manny fan ya there isn't any saying I just made it up so story is old but awesome it was created back when I Was student now perfected with logic but at that time Didnt know about webnovel at all only anime and games so  I Did this to fullfill my craving as internet was scarce I Made it like a game with my friends  you know I Hated those chinies manhwa which was amazing but had so Manny flaws and cringe things yet I couldn't find more zombie content so writing one also feel free to suggest i am newbie writer i am just writing what i would love to read so no long plethora of things describing same thing I hated partially because it would fill the chapter up when I had to pain strikingly gather pass and coins ( specifically shadow slave and lotm but it did make whole lot of things amazing and also it helps author to earn man authors really struggle it's really isn't easy to write when working on job and I Always feel fatigued to write

Unnecessary drama in chapter 28/29. This is not align with my taste so I had to unfortunately drop this novel. To new readers that found this novel, give it a try first.

how si it possible?, noooooooo!!!!!!?!!!

this book is lovely i love the characters

This story can **** itself. I'm done waiting. have a nice time. ,..................................................................................................................................

Immediately, I left them. I don`t want to add more nonsense conversations. I asked the staff where to sell the cores. He immediately leaded me to the trade center.

First of all,  I viewed your story in a reader's POV and not as a professional or something so you may find some fault in my review. There's something that I need to point out and here it goes:Just like what you said here in your review and author's note,  the prologue was really too much to handle. It doesn't (you know)  pull a reader to read the next chapters. Prologue is an introduction, you did a good job in it as a whole, I like how you ended it but you should tone down on your choices of word (I think it is the main reason that it's hard for a reader like me to continue, there's a lot of words that I don't understand hahaha) Aside from that,  on your chapter 4 (the filler chapter)  there's a phrase that has been bugging me for a while so I will point it out "You cannot afford to be heard,  even when you are injured - especially when you injured. Bla bla" The part where you said especially when you injured,  I feel that there's something lacking on it or it's entirely wrong but anyhow I hope you can fix it because it makes the reader confused. Other than that, I like how you narrate your story (You did a great job on it!) , especially when you're describing the things or the background,  it makes the story realistic because the reader can also imagine the places,  the person and etc. Overall,  keep up the good work fellow author! I'll try to finish your story,  I'm still in Chapter 6 and all I could say is the storyline is great so far. P.S please do keep in mind that I'm not familiar with this genre,  so if you find fault on the things that I said,  you can just disregard it.