the last battle god - Reviews

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Oh god, where do I begin…. The actual world-building and concept of going between the Present and Future seem uniquely good. As of 28 chapters, the MC is still an obnoxious idiot whom only validates women if they have large breasts. The author has stated that the character develops over time. But as of now, he’s unbearable. As much as I like the story, the main character and his actions led me to drop it. ?

This is MTL quality!If sentences like the following wouldn't stop you from reading a good story go right ahead. Everyone else this one is not for you."The light crossbow in the hand still pulled the arrow on the string, pulled the trigger to shoot at the bottom at the same time, still turned his head to urge loudly: “speed faster! Is your limp movement a sign that you have not eaten this morning? !”

Nice book it's too much nice book I recommend this book it's nice book let's read it by enjoying the mystery and the ghost I highly recommend this book it's very nice

he had to look after himself when he was a baby he was last at a orphanage where he had to work and do chores to fill his stomach but that to barely and when he was five he was kicked out because he was to weak and couldn't do any job available at the time, he scavenged for food in the trash and leftovers and survived for 10 years.

"No, How can this be equal. Many talented disciples were lost and the people we can choos- "(Pavilion Representative)

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Jordan pretended to pout. "Why won't wou tell wme." She batted her eyelashes.

Disclaimer: I don't normally write reviews without reading much more chapters, but since the work doesn't have any others I'll give it a start. BTW I'm leaving this review at Ch. 17.The writing quality is excellent as well as the characters that you meet. There is a lot of things that aren't mentioned at the beginning which seems a little lazy, but it might also be a method of making you think about things and want to read more to answer your questions. Can't say much about background as you don't see much at the moment. Though the update schedule seems quite concerning. Definitely has potential and has a good start, a few clichés here and there, but those make a good novel if used right. Honestly I think it will be a good novel at least and hope the author continues to make it work. Good Luck to you author! P.S. If it gets up to Ch. 100 someday I'll make another review then.

So the MC dies after seeing his GF out with another man. he then proceeds to get OP but remains loyal even when a vampire lady offers herself quoting he has someone to get back to. this tanked the character design for me because he owed that gf nothing. there wasn't enough relationship buildup for me to care, no trials they overcame other than he was lonely. the loyalty he gives her is not warranted. everything else would make this a great story. slight grammar issues but nothing you won't find in other novels.

Writer here, this is my first webnovel. It's a culmination of years of procrastinating to finally write something and I'm proud of it.I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it and I hope to create something even greater in the future.

As always it is good and curiousty increases for next chapter