The Infernal System - Reviews

a good novel well written as well as it's gu worms...................................................................................................

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There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zubI know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.

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Author, I have yet to read your novel ! But I want to ask you how you Named your novel, What the meaning of your novel's name. "Yandere ?"?

It is a very generic novel, the author at least in the first phase did not bother to explain things, he was simply writing superficially and quickly, in my opinion there was a lack of writing with more details and explanations, as it took only 2 chapters and the MC  he goes from an ordinary human who planned the death of his parents and committed suicide (he was aware of his luck, money and escape were possible) to a great powerful magician. I reading, but it is more out of false hope that the author leaves aside worn clichés and a little attention to detail and originality.

This novel is much more sophisticated and have cliche touch of imperial era and fantasy work

I like transmigration story. Mc seems pretty good.But this novel lack many details and sense.Author wanna add 'teleport' ability to MC, he just add it. Thats it. No details. She come from 'modern world' and what with teleport?!? How come...Another characters are such a bunch of id*ot,shameless.More filler characters, filler , filler , filler...Just wanna change habit of characters, just change it.Ex. Mc's dad is such a bad dad more than 10 years, he dont care about his daughter, let other bullshi* her, scold her, never protect her,....And then *BOOM* here you get super daddy 1ea.He loves and protect her. And also cant forget her mom.Okay, I will stop it right now.....Translator wanna change names, just change it. Some paragraph use he/his but then it becomes she/her.Currency is such a mass. Dollar,silver,gold,...Feel free to use it.And sometimes it 500,000 xx and then 50,000 xx. Dont understand anymore.

"Ok. Will they be alright here?"

wisdom:50

This was considered practical experience by pitting classmates against each other in a mock Villain and Hero scenario, but what were the teachers looking for? Power? Strength? Tactics? Efficiency? No…something didn't sit right with him at the answers he came up with. He was sure that those were also about to be tested, but there was something else… what was it?

Shikotsumyaku (Dead Bone Pulse) - This bloodline gives the user to use his bones to attack or defend. Similar to Blade release the bone density can increase by absorbing Chakra.