I am giving this novel five star because there isn't any problem with writing and grammar and the story development is also good and it's also fun to read this novel just hope author to write it to the end.(◕ᴗ◕✿)
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.