The Immortal Grimm: Lycan - Reviews

Let's start with the pros:- Innovative, a topic that has been done multiple times but it has been executed differently. It's different from all the other doom type of novel- Horror, no way near the type of horror that is in My House of Horror but it's still pretty good. In that novel the horror is literally the main theme so I can understand it.- System, the system isn't op or annoying. A very good, typical MC's advantage but not exaggerated. The good kind of system.- Interesting, it leaves you on the edge at certain moments making you want to continue reading to find out what happens and how it happens.- Accurate real life medical knowledge.Cons:- "my goal shall be of finding out what happened to my parents!" I hate the MCs that have zero personal goals or personal drive for themself (but this is just my preference).- MC, the main character is not exactly intelligent, even if a lot of people are saying the opposite and  praising him for it. He tried to analyze the medicine (wasting them) given to him by the system by conducting experiments, because he was scared of what the system could do to him, and thats STUPID. Here is why: the system is literally in your brain, it can do anything it wants to you and you wouldnt be able to resist anyway. Moreover, the medicine given by the system are clearly made with way more advanced technologies and, not even just science but also magic probably. How do you expect to understand what they do? They may be made so the "side effects" that the MC is scared off works only on him, how is he expecting to understand how they work? If those medicines has been tampared by the system as he is scared of, there would be no way for him to actually know. The system is on a whole different level and if it wants for him to not know, he would never know. There is no use wasting medicines that literally gives you the ability to live longer (he has a tumor) for useless experiments, if he was intelligent he should understand this.- Side Characters, the mc was one of the worse type of student there was, the kind that slacked, caused trouble and did nothing apart from spending money and bring down the reputation of the school (a really famous one at that) A professor tried to help him and defend him in vain for more than a year, but the MC didnt care and ignored him, making the professor hate the student (MC) after all he did to try help him, losing every hope he has for him. Now the MC comes back, says that he is different and, magically, the professor that hated him before regained hope in him. THIS all happened in the span of 2 lines, 2 LINES. The side-character literally bend to force the plot forward even if it doesnt make sense.- Small plot holes, being able to livestream live when you are at the bottom of the ocean, literally kilometers under water. A phone with an important video that didnt have a SIM card initially (and it was a problem because of it) suddendly have it and other small bits..Fantastic concept, good writing style, but with many small and medium problems, nowhere near enough to get 4.9 stars. 4.4 - 4.5 would be the maximum in my opinion for this novel. The only reason people rate it so high is because we got used to the garbage that webnovel has. P.S. Comparing this to My House of Horror is ridiculous. MHoH is not exactly a masterpiece but still better than this.Rant over.

Testing... 1(brain)... 2(eyes)... 3(comprehensive ability to use both while reading this)... ✔️Before I begin... Cough! Cough! NO HAREM!!!! ?Okay, now that I've gotten that out, I can proceed with a little evaluation.This is my first attempt at writing a Villain book and a different take at trying to implement a variation of a sibling to it.I appreciate all who go out of their comfort zone to comment, vote, gift, purchase privilege chapters, use fast passes regularly, give 'constructive' criticism in the comments or reviews, and joined my discord server.Feel free to ask anything that isn't in the auxiliary chapter [if I don't reply but give a like means it's definitely in the auxiliary chapter]Have a great day!~Author Bloom ?

This is more like a copy of "swallowed star". It's the same apocalyptic setting. Just like in the SS world, there is also some form of protection barring people from going into outer space. There is also a spaceship that has a robot that talks just like in this. I have read the raw till 177, but it's all reminding me of Swallowed Star. Does anybody else feel the same?

Oh man I just read the first few chapters and I’m hooked. I like the fact that the mc took some time to change into he to she. In real life it’s not easy if you’ve suddenly been changed into a girl when you’ve been a man your whole life. I love that realistic side. Either way I can’t wait for more chapters!

I would like that the author could post more chapters.I think that the characters are realy interesting, special the mc.This history is also very good and i will wait for the author to post more chapter

Hello author-sanCan you please add 'R-18' to the title of the chapter if it was present in it?!cause for someone like me i want to know the frequency of the 'R-18' scenes in the novel.Thank you.

I was hoping for something good based on the ratings ... alas, chapters 1-3 were pretty bad. Writing quality and language were the biggest issues for me and they made me drop this within 3 chapters. The author jumps between tenses and generally has issues with sentence structure and coherence. It almost feels like something machine-translated at times.

I hate that im upto date with this.... i miss binge reading all day and getting lost for hours

At hinawakan ng dalaga sa mukha ang binata at tumingin sa mata ng binata.

Ah yes, I see," the being who was called Alucard... or Dracula... or by various other names... said. "Our new recruits have arrived... and since they had brought along new problems as well. So it is on me to `entertain´ them," he stated.

Very good book. It has a good story and i would really recommend to read it

The storyline for the story and the protagonists can be said to be very interesting. They have their own stories and secrets. And for a first timer at writing the romance genre, you did a good job!