The Illegitimate Who Devours Weapons - Reviews

Fix the missing chapters and get your story straight until then consider this droppedNo communication is sometimes worse than liesFillerfillerfillerfullerfuuuuuuu

I give this a 1 star just to balance the Idiot that gave this Novel a 5 star rating while saying in his Review that this novel is at best a 2,5

So this is a prequel from "the portal of wonderland" and shared universe with "a record of Mortal's Journey To Immortality".................

this novel cant even reach the mediocre standard just from chapter 1 you will see a huge and unexplainable plothole no matter what the author says in later chapters you cant cover this plothole the mc is an ordinary person before he reincarnatesafter he reincarnates he acts dumb and changes completely but nobody suspects anything?then he thinks he became some medical god who can make a potion just because he knows some of the materials they used plus adding his own materials to "remove" the side affects with no fking recipe nothing then he thinks that because the mc who will definitely kill him hasnt done anything to him yet he wont do anything back either plus the quality of the writing is bad and the conversations like people with mental issues talkingall of this make the novel trash material i didnt even bother to read the second chapter nor should you

This is a fan fic and yet it is locked at 20 or 21 chapters? What?                                                                        

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I've read every one of the author's books I've loved every single one of them and Beast taming is my favorite Power System. so between faith and the author's ability and a type of power I love I'm willing to rate this highly before it even gets started.

It's been three months when are you updating again?

"How the hell are you inside me?!" I said finally.

"I sense great fluctuations in the mana density in the room at the end of this hall!"

Kinan memelototkan matanya dan segera melepaskan tangannya dari genggaman Rayhan,"Dasaarrr mesumm kamu yahhh!!!!"kesal Kinan sambil memukul lengan kiri Rayhan. Bukannya malah merintih kesakitan, Rayhan malah semakin tertawa melihat wajah kesal Kinan.