The Housekeeper's Daughter [Elvis] - Reviews

wow! read this before going to bed..hahaha

Mediocre at best, seems like a newbie writerShort chapters with little or useless information which makes them boring, chapters 26-35 can be shortened and edited to 1 or 2 chapters.Cheat could be explained better and the whole cultivation system is still unclear, until now talents were only people from influencial families that received lots of resources. MC seems gutsy or ignorant, being so weak, but acting all mighty with fmc that is a few major realms higher.Usual face slapping, but done in a poor manner, starting from mc being uderstimated and badmouthed then he does something amazing and everyone is shocked to the core, but still continue to look down on him and hope that he will fail...

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Overall a very good read i hope it gets selected soon.                                                                                    

Even as Enzo gazed upon it, more of the structure was still materializing out of view, growing infinitely.

Faith stepped out gently slapping his back, her normal cold demeanor was replaced by a genuine concerning look, "You ok?" She inquired quietly.

"Why have you suddenly changed towards me?"

Ever since I woke after I died, I knew that wherever I was, I wasn't in my body.

Quite the odd situation I have ended up in, if I do say so myself...

They could see the weariness written on her face, and hear her somewhat labored breathing.

As they disappeared into the distance, the girl was left speechless.

She called a single word in a different language and a sword was tossed to her. The blade was shaped a lot like Percy's sword Riptide, with a leaf-like blade. It had black edges but the center was gold. The hilt guard was also gold, as was most of the hilt, which was wrapped in black leather for a handgrip. The pommel, also gold, was shaped like an oval and had a Greek word inscribed in the bottom, which she held up for us to see.