The Holy crussed - Reviews

I am in love with all your books, you are good at what you do.

Their is no overarching plot as of now. Characters are very 2 dimensional. The world development is decent but nothing to write home about. In fact i am giving it a decent rating as the way it is being unveiled it seems promising but at 40 chapters i can't say for sure. But the story flows quite smoothly and the writing is decent. I rather prefer these type of novels despite the lack of originality because they don't have a problem with their pacing and flows unlike most of original novels.

I read the first chapter and was strongly reminded of a Korean drama by the name of "Fall in love with me" and the first chapter is what happened in the first episode is this a fan fiction?! I'll read further but the chapter titles are telling me its following the kdrama story if they were in a fantasy world not a bad thing but not really your story as it were you even took from the title of drama as well "fall for me.

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This girl looked at me with piercing eyes. Well, speaking of which, how did this girl ended up showing up here?

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"Focus!.... And be prepared for anything!" I warned her and the others as both Daredevil and I searched for the source of the voice.

Glancing back at the forest once more I focused on the ground, picking up a stick I placed it vertical and let go. Looking in the direction it was pointing I began walking. Now, this may have seemed like a cool-headed decision, but in all actuality, I was having a mini panic attack.

As he swept his gaze in a circle, Sasuke discovered that many people in the group he was with had melancholic expressions. There were others that looked at certain people with looks of deep hatred, looking like they would spit out flames from their eyes.

The story is amazing and has room for more characters.

It has a good start, Writing isn’t bad either.

Hey, I’m the writer. Overall, it’s good, solid plot, well-developed characters, and a world that makes sense. The pacing is deliberate, the tension is real, and the emotions hit when they need to. Writing quality? Sharp. Story? Engaging. If you’re looking for depth, you’ll find it. If not, that’s on you.