I had come here for the yuri, but gotten a lot more instead. I had reached the paid chapters (75) and despite there being little to no yuri, (prob cuz they are 4yrs old right now) when I read this story, everything was done so well and so interesting that I didn't even have time to look for mistakes. The only thing I can remember is that the word real was missing the -l in one sentence, I had no qualms about the writing quality, the SOU, the Story Development, not the Character Design. Let me not forget, the World Background was an amazing piece of work as well. This review is kind of biased since I do love Pancakes (author), but it shouldn't be far from the truth, I encourage you all to read this wonderful story, you will like it, and if you don't, keep reading and then you will like it; yes, I am saying your only option is to like it because you will like it.....
