The Hidden Queen Returns - Reviews

This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4.It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese.Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.

Awesome story, I’ve binged it over the last few days and must say that this is one of the best novels I’ve read so far. Shoutout to the author who delivers such a masterpiece for free

Only way I see this having been picked is due to the ease of translation. Half the novel is word filler of repeated messages about his element points that aren't even different, his whole point of getting strong is for his new fiancée that he gets in chapter 1 yet you don't see her for 10 chapters at a time. I think his fiancée has less screen time than her own father. The love enemy fodder 'Donald' has more screen time than the fiancée despite dying randomly 15 chapters in. He had 1,000 failures towards smithing in a row, yet once he gets the system he hasn't failed without forced interuption. No explanation as to why he suddenly turned into a god smith. System didn't give him any smithing  talent. All it did was make him stronger, which mind you, we don't even know the combat system. All we know is that the novel is not good.

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It's a perfect example of a novel full of plotholl.You just need to read first 5 chapter to know what I mean............

Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!

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ok. this is a good story to me, and I like the bully girl x bullied boy plot. please don't drop this cause it's really good that I keep thinking on what happened to the characters.

Maaaan.. that is a good read.. i was laughing my butt off when my name showed there.. HAHAHAHA.. thank you for that chap rose chan.. this is a great novel.. very recomm to read!

Alright first review from a lvl 15!overall the book is very enjoyable. The author knows how to hook the reader into wanting more. He knows how to describe a lot of things in details. The plot and world building is actually good. The cliffhangers will end up making us wanna fight the author.Here will be some spoilers and criticism.Do not read this if you don’t wanna be spoiled.Sometimes you mix up the povs of who is fighting. In one of the fight where belain was fighting you switch to Mika name instead of belain.(I probably spelt his name wrong)  The pacing of the story could use some work. The mc has a little over a year left to live but still struggles against students. He won against Ophelia but lost to  Xander and struggled against the disciplinary committe. Granted he was exhausted and other factors came into play. I still think he should’ve put a way better fight considering he won against Ophelia and the demons and survived against Olivia.The romance with the teacher caught me off guard. When we things progressive future more into their relationship? Will it be a harem with the other members?

This novel is what I call a tragic story.The protagonist might be strong, however not strong enough to prevent unfortunate things happening to the people dear to him.Some allies are forced to betray him due to insufficient strength, his enemies are an entire dimension above him (literally).His paths are always blocked.His story is tragic, however it's also quite entertaining too.

"So why the fuss????"