The Hero's Return with his Yandere Wife - Reviews

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Well first of all i am really glad to come across this book....the author ingeniously incorporated the indian myths into a martial arts and cultivation novel....that is so brilliant....the story development is good so far even it's a bit fast forward and some of the details remain a bit unclear....and the characters are good so far....the environment of the story is also very interesting.....but there are some grammatical errors and also the name of some of the characters keep changing....but overall the story is good so far n m enjoying this utterly....so keep up the good work n make this story more n more interesting

I absolutely love this book, and I will add them to my collection to follow up. Thank you very much for the wonderful story! The book cover is interesting too! :)

The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.

Mainly the authors gave the character a too OP system. He can literally create anything he wants as long as he has souls. This leads to way too many possibilities and options that aren’t even explored by MC and you’re always left with the question “why didn’t he just do .....”. It makes the story frustrating and tiresome. Also after 39 chapter is where it starts costing coins which is BS.

You have got a kind of imagination that I can ever not imagine. it is good.' to my thinking, you should work on your cover nothing else. I have started reading the novel by its synopsis will go ahead.

after 26 chapters and giving this book enough chance i conclude this is a chinese trash book . not worth spending ur stones to unclock .........

please reconsider your decision...your story is good  , please continue post the New update story

Hey! Just started on this website! Glad my first book was yours! Love the suspense, But I think the story is moving a  bit too fast! I want to know what the character is thinking about while doing the deeds that he commits. Anyway I will follow your Patreon! I want the early chapter! so keep on releasing them early so I can read them before everyone here can! Thanks so much

I mean she went from a caterpillar to some kind of vampire ****. I Have no idea how that works. Anyways, The story is still good, not a fan of the yuri idea but i'm okay with it.

A heroes journey at this point of time? Respect

its my turn