The Heroines All Want to Kill Me - Reviews

the most amazing story which was written so well that I cried and cried in many parts of it the way the author described the depth of their feelings and gave importance to each soul and different views are awesome I don't want to be a spoiler but the scean when angelica lost her child I was crying.

this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.

This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.

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I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying:-first they just tried to kill him and steal his game.        ->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason.-then they followed him and invited themselves at his home.       ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality).        ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason-he tries to work but gets interrupted again         ->but still forgave them for no valid reason Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week. In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch.It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests.Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.

"Ha, If it isn't the [Perfumed Protector]"

"No highness. As such retainers are ultimately responsible to the councilmembers of the NAC I believe they could be entrusted with this particular task while the military's reorganization is in progress."

But if there was ever a night that she really needed to indulge in a drink and forget, it was definitely this night.

Bob bought the Contract for life under the Spider queens request as to prove that he will never break the contract. The Contract Cost 150,000 EP but Bob was more than willing to pay that amount for an ally. While this was going on bob sent out Urgle to get Lilith, Nargulg and Brenda so that he could introduce them to the new people for Lilith and for The Spider Queen to meet the people who her children will be working under.

'I'm preserving myself for you until we got  married, my purity will be the only gift I can give you' she said smiling,

"So that means that I could technically live longer than others if I stay in the learning dimension." Wei softly spoke. As he read on, he learned that the learning dimension has different kinds of courses he could take such as learning Java, and other languages. He could also learn to hack.

THen he entered the vehicle, on the driver seat. Next to him was Tang Ya, behind him was BeiBei and Ma XiaoTao.