The only issue this novel has is not enough chapters. Read this book, you will love it. I think I’ve reread some parts like 10 times and the entire story atleast twice. The story is always interesting and everything has a meaning. There is no filler or bs and everything flows great. Now go make some tea or coffee and read this thing!
Well you need to be better at writing it Though it has flaws but still keep it up bro The story is great but you need better prologue the writing is A mess but at least the story is good so do your best!
I loved reading it before as he tried to remain low key and didn't go into troubles... but then he started saving people, do that save slaves and its fking frustrating to see the character you like change into a fking cliche hero character... sorry i dropped this due to this
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This is my first time reading a web novel of crime genre. I was hooked from the first chapter. The way you introduce the characters are just mind blowing.I have only read few chapters and is eager to read more. This book is a hidden gem. I don't understand why this types of book never come in top 10 and all. Hope, many more readers would have the luck to read your work soon.
Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
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When Chen entered the change rooms, the sound of water dripped in the distance. He rubbed the back of his neck, stopping when he emerged in the centre changing area. Like always, the shelves lined the walls, currently empty of most student's belongings. To his disbelief, there was however one person remaining.
