The Heiress and her Billionaire Older Lover - Reviews

This story starts out kinda slow, Finally, it gets going in a traditional sort of Zombie apocalypse with a system kinda way. The thing is, the Protagonist is too big a scumbag. Personally, I would rather die than be forced to be someone's lackey. Correspondingly, I would never force someone else to be my slave or even follower. Uf nothing else, who wants to be surrounded by scum who would rather submit than to simply die? Yeah, and when he took the woman's pistol! Guns are sacred,. Kill someone, bit disarming them and leaving them alive is equivalent to spitting on their shadow!

Good stuff!If you like evil and ruthless MCs then you'll probably love this. The pacing is a bit weird and all over the place at first, but it does get better. The story and the mc is interesting, and the villains aren't stupid like other novels tend to make them out to be.I do think there are some issues with some of the storylines, and how it suddenly jumps to another storyline almost immediately, but all in all a good read.

When Qidian’s greedy for money yet always picks trash novels over good ones and MTLs them. What are they thinking. Do they even have a brain?

Early in the novel the mc straight up enslaves a woman because she's strong in the future. Needs a slavery tag as I wouldn't have bothered to read the chapters I did if it had it. I also wonder if these reviews are fake or everyone who reads this is just okay with the mc performing a soul enslavement on an innocent woman.

Enjoyable read, seems like a tower climbing at first but so far doesn't seem like the case. After reading the first 3 arcs, I felt the story so far was a prologue. A large chunk was dedicated to the trial/entry to the tower per se. The overall story felt like it progressed slowly overall but the pace and action within the trial made it seem fast paced. The fighting scenes were well done and didn't feel repetitive. I liked how the MC was not always the strongest nor smartest one within the group. Other members are capable of making their own actions and pulling their own weight helping each other. Not being always dependent on the MC is rare. Though the 3rd arc MC took the reins.The characters are nice and they have their own quirks. They mesh well together. Though you still have some of your stereotypical characters.   Some thing I disliked is that it felt repetitive that someone is knocked unconscious or captured and needed someone to save them. Characters got separated a lot in the trial so there was a lot of pov changes not bad at all. Additionally, there are a lot of named characters most might not get enough development. Lastly, a lack of deaths. There was always danger lurking around but nobody ever dies.

Hello Author, I noticed thatbypu like to use quaint and rarely use words which do indeed give the novel a unique and flashy feel but I would advice you to not use them any further unless you can suddenly increase your writing skills by a large margin because using flashy words when your writing skills are not quite there yet will make it harder for you to keep up the 89 same pace and quality of the story. It will make it harder for you to explain certain scenarios without constantly referencing which will give important scenes a rigid feel.sincerely, a fellow aspiring writer.

It had been hundreds of years since humanity and their Witch allies had been forced to retreat to the fortress cities after the disastrous war to eliminate the Magi Clans. Nuclear weapons had burned the skies, and Grand Magic pulled entire continents beneath the seas before the end, but the victory was secured, no Magi was left alive in their slowly recovering world. Or so they thought. Wolfe Noxus was born on the lower levels of a fortress city run by the Morgana Coven, raised under the glow of magical lights, with magic and technology entwined in every aspect of his life. But after his eighteenth birthday, when a get rich quick scheme led him to the forbidden ability to use the powers of the Magi, his whole life would change. The forbidden inheritance of the Magi was his. All he had to do was live long enough to embrace it.

Unrealistic, unreasonable, pretentious and annoying ?this book is so annoying, the main reason why is the female lead. They try to portray her in a good way but girl, I'm not having it.. couldn't explain well but you can read the first 10 chapters and you'll get it.the male lead.. oh my god, he is abnormal. this dude falls completely in love with her after she did a few smart things, and he.. is p e r s i s t e n t.this was a waste of time and s few braincells to me. Peace ✌?

Does she not know what's happening? I mean to be fair I have no clue, but what the fuck?

Heeding that Lan Jiang immediately went alert and nodded his head to imply that he got it.

He didn't have the energy to sustain more yet he could control them for hours. When ever he would use them for target practice he would use them as huge whips and as soon as they left the ground a huge CRACK sound could be heard. He use them as whips or he would use them like a lasso to catch and hold his practice targets.

The necromancer dropped a gem.