The hate of The Forsaken god - Reviews

I like this story and find it intriguing

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Horrible Grammar though readable, so 2 stars
stability of updates 4 points

story: sounds actually quite interesting but its the generic revenge storyv 4 stars for potential

character design: nothing special might get better later on but for now 3 stars

world background: i don't know.i've only read to chapter 5 before i could'nt take the grammar anymore so I'm assuming it's average. 3 stars

i have no idea how somebody could give this 5 stars. I gave it 3.2 stars and thats me being generous. The grammar alone would make 5 stars impossible, the weird analogies make it even harder "the clans hid, like  a snake hides its legs".