The Harp of Tasoula - Reviews

I am loving the novel development presently, I quite a good novel there are no harem cliches or girl loving here and there I was thinking it was going to happen before during the Wang family daughter and I was about to abandon it but thankfully I didn't. it also doesn't have those arrogant protagonist vibe everything is done with great stability, but his strength increase is quite slow, but that not the issue the issue was him not using his main cheat anymore which is to use forbidden cultivation technique since he can't die

Common story with overused elements. Only using the hype of the game pubg to get people to read it. Pathetic to say the least, story is bland, with terrible worldbuilding. Characters have one dimensional personalities that make people wonder if they even have a brain.

This review is based until chapter 70.The story is really slow. the grammar is ok except the author doesn’t know how to use the correct pronoun. he keeps on using ‘they’  or ‘their’ when he’s only referring to a single person. this usually confuse me because i always thought that he was talking about a group of people. He also keeps on referring to other chars as noble this noble that, half elf this half elf that. It should be a name in order for us to remember who is who. for me there’s a lot of filler chapters in here. the mc seems to be like a minOr char here. tImothy seems to be the mc here. i dont know.

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this novel is nothing special very generic, OP mc reincarnated mc, harem, blabla.  if you want to take a break from complex and deep stories from the big novels, this is for you

Warning!! This is BL!! That said it is a cute and funny read. If you like BL you will like this story. ??? ------------------_-------------------––––·––·------------------------

I hope you enjoy reading this novel as I am enjoying writing it. Please leave your comments and ratings, I read them all and take them into consideration in my writing.

I waited for a second then started speaking." No I've never slept with or fucked the disease bringer. I also can't see why you even wanted her as a wife, the damn woman is a hooker, you know that, I know that, the village knows that, all the villagers nearby know that and I'm sure there's people in Arretium that know this too." I said and circle retained it's original color.

Abel nodded and walked out as he went to see the doctor.

He also realized that they probably brought all their young misses to try to get on the good side of Wushu and then propose a marriage agreement since all the other major 3 clans wanted to ally with the Feng clan.

Theres still high school. I can confess to her anytime.