The Halfheart Journals: Powder keg - Reviews

Interesting read, she got married to what she never believed was in existence.? This is lit ???

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grammar flew and jumped off the cliff.hard to read.read hard ugabugaugabuga book?grammar ded

During his journey he revisited his memories of near past. He saw himself sleeping during his morning post, sometimes he saw himself just walking in park and many more.

-What's this place Plot?

Entering the lobby they were about to go up the elevator as they were both tired, but before they could. Mayu noticed them and called out.

"Well said,"

"I don't want to leave him yet." Zhen Xiu told her about her plans.

"Hmmm...Looks like u really don't know! Perhaps you are new in this country???"(Nutcracker)

Solid writing quality. MC is overall tolerable and does not act too irrational. My 2 biggest issues are: 1) Motivation. The MC does not have any actual motivation to get strong. He does not even have any goals, making his journey feel empty. 2) Zero social relationships. MC does not have any meaningful connection with anyone. He doesn‘t care about anyone and nobody cares about him.

This might seem a little early for a proper review, but let me just say this.The writing quality is not good, there’s a bunch of mistakes, and some things seems random.And I recommend you let AI check the spelling, and if you’re serious about everything I would rewrite the chapters (I learned that the hard way)Either way, I hope you publish more often so you can improve yourself.