The mc is not one of the bois, nuff said.
In anycase, I find how independable the mc is annoying. I have a feeling the story will have a repetitive cycle of the mc being too confident, face slapping, then there is a hiccup where he is having a big disaster, and then magically it tides over.
I mean the fact is, he has not once concluded any sort of testing towarda his abilities. He just sort of hope it works. We havent seen him activily train his abilities either, especially since ita been said that the extent to which he has his abilities arent to the level of the original patient.
He is dumb, arrogant, and extremely lucky. Also he seema to be far more physically able than it makea sense. Like sneaking that piece of paper, how? I dont remember a patient that could do that, he most certainly doesn't have that type of skill. How bad of a secret agent are u if a total noob can do that? Horrible character design..
Ans the whole seducing the woman to get her on their side, seems like such a dumb way to get ppl to so things. U really think someone like her would abandon their ambition and work for some punk who only wants sex? Thats horrible world development and character development. Tf
I can also see him being blinded by lust. He is a hopeleas pervert. Like how vain do u have to be to seek satisfaction in the number of women u conquer. And obiously his superiority complex, that comes from wanting to steal other ppl's women. I can see his stealing a mans girl, and causing aome type of chaos for no reason. All bc he needs the satisfaction of being better than other men. Thats pretty vain and I dislike it. Its like that other book with the 10 keys, i can easilt see thia book degrade bc of the pervert quality.
Ik alot of my review is full of opinion. But thats what a review is, my opinion on a novel, and i think its not great.
Honeslty i think the novel is just baiting all the h.orny ppl into it.
