The story is nice. Writer did a good job in plot and imagenation.Story development is very good. Atleast story don't move at snails pace. that is good for readers like me.Character are designed well. but yes there is still need of some improvement but writer can do that slowly. Chapter updates quite regularly.Writer did a very good job in world background designing. His imagination is quite good. Story has some flows in terms of grammar . but that can be ignored as it didn't affect me much if the overall all story is good.overall plot is good to give it a try and worthy of attention. minor mistakes can be overlooked as this is writes first book.keep up good work author ?