I really can't understand why so much people like this.The story is pretty generic, "hero gets a magic intelligent item in the form of a system that grants OP power with some xianhuan context
Like many before me, this author is shamelessly reviewing his own work. The story isn't perfect and it isn't boring either. Like many xanxia or eastern fantasy novels, you might find some cliche here and there or mistakes. Anyway, give it a try and you might end up liking it.
I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.
Well I read raw everything is good until his supposed future wife decided to trick him and take his half sister wife to upper realm and mc I mad because he doesn't even know she got her emotions erased and and his other wife also knows about that technique but doesn't bother to tell him and due to impatient when he will found out I started skipping chapters at the end I don't know how many chapters I skipped hoping to know well I no longer can know because I already lost the fun and point of story so I dropped it
I absolutely love this story 100% would recommend can’t wait for the next update. The only issue I have is then constant stat breaks in the writing it make the flow of the story a bit rough but I know that it is needed so I can live with it.
Ok, I'm back after reading a few chapters; I really like the story, the writing is good, the grammar is good, the pacing is fine. It's not usually the story I'd go for, but I'm enjoying it.
I just wrote this review to warn people about his girlfriend corpse got raped. although author said there is no netorare. but I don't want give bad rating for this point.
