I like it its good writing my favorite character is the god of reincarnation he sounds so chill and says sarcarstic things.Good job on the novel i cant wait for more chapters
The story is fun and instersting but the grammar is really bad and need an edit also the explaination about background story for each character is lacking and the flow of story feels rushed.
It’s okay but the story is kind of scrambled Buuuuuuuuttt the theme is like animeAs for the characters it could use more information on the villain and the plot picks up in The second volume but it’s okay
CRASH!!! "Wow! this is so exciting! I Definitely am going to pass!" Said Okuyasu excitedly as "The Hand" erased space to pull himself towards the next batch of robots.
Leaving behind a memory for the people who he had been with would be enough for him, even if he dies early. At least he knew that was his, and not just something that was a part of a script written by a higher being.
