The Girl Slowly Lost in Exposure - Reviews

The writer has done an amazing job portraying her Imagination and fictional world on paper,considering the writer is very young and just getting started, it makes it even more commendable how well written it is,The story is very interesting,and the main characters are well developed, so relatable and loveable,but I think that some of the side characters should have had a little more development and back story,there are some confusions regarding the dates and the ages, but not too much of a problem unless you're picking the novel apart word by word,anywho I am definitely very intrigued by this and am very inspired it.just reading the first paragraph got me interested,and I am definitely gonna continue reading it,I definitely recommend reading or giving it a try cuz you won't be disappointed.

A great read, captured my attention from the first chapter and i just couldn’t stop reading This is a wonderful novel that i would recommend to anyone I love the concept of the novel

Writing quality - This is a 2. It's clear the author just wrote whatever nonsense that popped into his mind without reviewing it or editing. The grammar mistakes and poor sentencing structures quickly pile up leaving what has been written ineligible and hard to make sense of.Stability of updates - This is a 1. This may be unfair but I can't be bothered to check chapter dates. However, this novel has been in my library for a while now and there's barely more chaps than what was initially available. I feel that under no circumstances would update stability reach 3 or higher.Story development - This is a 2. The story as of C11 isn't anything special. The mc came from an orphanage then went to some sort military training thing.Character design - This is a 1. Most characters are background mobs with no explanation to their looks and end up being described as a collective group. The few times we do get distinctive explanations it's basically just something like: that guys's a dwarf. Not only that but we've only seen the personality types of 3 people and they've very basic.The mc is supposed to be cold and rational. He sees everyone as someone he might need to kill. However, he acts like a dumbass and is fine with staying weak even whilst considering how he might have to kill the strongest person in his group. He gets followed around by someone trying to act buddy buddy with him he initially thinks about how he wants to kill him but then out of the blue starts conversing with him as if he has accepted him as a friend.The 2nd character (can't remember name) is basically just described as a righteous goody 2 shoesThe 3rd character (can't remember name) basically just attaches himself to the mc and we're not given any reason why.World background - This is a 1. The background of the novel is very limited and from what I vaguely remember is kinda generic.

Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are  delayed in past two months

Yumina opened her fingers to peek. The world of consenting adults surely was...!

That's wonderful. To begin with, how many rooms are on the second floor? It's good that I didn't look for it without knowing that. In my house, there are only two rooms on the second floor. Without even needing to look for it, you'd be right half of the time. I understood with her answer just how disconnected we were.

"Unlike those novels you read, I am not bored out of my wits to sent a lowly soul to another world, nor do I owe you anything." He said as he walked closer to Alex.

    He wondered what was going to happen now? Genkei is actually Genos from the past, right? ... He looks young and compared to the Genos he knows now, the kid looks fragile. If anything were to happen to him in this time, would that mean Genos would be affected too?

I am not planning on it

The loud sound of cocks crowing to the sky alerted the people that dawn is fast approaching. Luckily, the pair was almost done with the nights work. One last net to be gathered and one last batch of fish to be cleaned and finally he and his son could rest until noon. At that time, they would have to do other means of work to earn a living.

"Well, I can't answer you for now if you're asking how did I know what you feel." I gasped with what he said, he really can see through my mind.

me esta gustando mucho como creas el personaje, espero que no abandones, estare apoyando tu historia :D