the girl on red - Reviews

I would love to get into this right away but thise strange bot accounts with the email make this more intimidating than it really should be....

I haven't spot any flaw or maybe i just miss  it...ah there are some but it okay pass it and the story begin to be interesting ... This is story about mc transmigrated to world of summoning but the world already meet its end... Human about to lose so they live like dog... Sumoner lose their ability because some kind of barrier lock the spirit world or somethingThe mc can summon human from earth and gain strength from them when they growth....hmmmm....oh they can awaken some kind of superpower... I'm sorry if it hard to read but if you understand please give it a try...

It's a slow burn, once you get past a few chapters the story picks up the pace and is something you can not put down, A little grammatical mistakes are there but they won't put you off the story totally. Worth a shot.

Genuinely love the story not alot of pokemon stories thats not about fighting hope it nvr drops ############################################################################################################

To be very honest the story in getting quite bland because till now it revolves around kingdom building and management of resources and their no major issues for the MC and no good fights but I hope the world building will be worth the time and I story will pickup the pace.

" What's with the treatment difference seriously. Don't they hate us equally? "

"Here say ah. The ice cream's gonna help to lessen the pain on your tongue and sorry" said King as he fed her another spoon full.

A normal human, do not play with me, even the immortals of the world were no more than ants before those beings, and you say normal human? It's a mockery, do not fuck me there's no way I'm a normal human fucking !!!!, We're all silent, miss knuckles creak And just as I was preparing to hit him, Leah tried to slap him.

Dusk: Well~? Or would you like to feel your pussy pleasured by other girls for the next 27 days?

"Are you alright?" Minerva asked me as I sat down my chair.

One tried to flank her, I told her to ignore him and lash out at the one on the left in front of her with her buckler and thrust at the second with her blade. Mental commands, mind you. I made sure the image matched the directions and again she parroted the move nearly perfectly. A benefit of being undead and having no real pain sensors to keep her body from making odd motions, or being a Guardian? It could even be a bonus of what she is, a Death Knight. More to learn.

"You have no idea," Luffy replied before turning his attention back to the princess and the bounty hunting duo. The three of them then peeked out from behind the rock to check if the coast was clear. After making sure no one was around the three of them took off in the direction of where the large dust cloud was approaching the capital. "So, they are heading straight for the rebel army," Luffy observed.