The Gate 001 - Reviews

is there going to be an update

Two terrorists having discussion in a bar,The waiter asks them what the discussion was about.Terrorist: We are planning to kill 14 thousand people and a donkey.Waiter: Why a donkey?Then one terrorist says to the other,"See I told you nobody will care about the 14 thousand people"

The story is well designed as far as I have read, the grammar and structuring need some serious work, and the character creation is a nice change from a mc that is always stupidly righteous.

A Wampire Loli, hmm though this seems a bit add but once you got to know that the author had a peculiar interest in Horror then you will understand that this is a new creation of his in a very interesting way.Every thought of this before, I ask all!

Cool story.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

I thought it would be a good book but WTF is Webnovel doin here? First 20 and 5 Chapters and now 0 ? Wow cant wait for the future if it goes on like that

The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125

I love this so much it's not even funny. Little mushroom is so cutee!! ?

Her father was her college sweetheart, so their age was basically thesame. He had a fit body, from playing soccer when he was younger and now he kept fit by going to the gym. He was tall and wore a suit, having just come from work just like her mother. Her father had blue eyes and dirty blonde hair.

A young man is clenching his fists while keeling on the ground.

" Papa mengikuti akun instagrammu,kamu suka motretkan."

"Can't we play tag one more time Mama..."