Hmmmm the synopsis says parentless ...but in the story ....
Nothing unique yet
But being a sucker for system novel I can't help it
And y is the system a woman(seems to be going in that direction)...............................
It's look good so 5 star and i hope you don't drop this novel it's ok yo take a break sometime but don't drop .........................................................................................
will you continue after chapter 66????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it sound really good i hope i enjoy it but you can not drop half way,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Honestly I love this novel and I think there should be even more. My boss caught me reading this at work and yelled at me but after I told him what novel he was he even gave me a break to continue
Dont be fooled by the 5 star reviews of people with standard as low as Hitlers wife. Or they are just troll/fake accounts. But anyways
1. Description is awful you're not reading a World created by an author, but instead just being told what to think up. The most descriptions are going to get about anybody is maybe if you're lucky color.
2. This has the standard plot of born into a wealthy family wealthy family suffers and some b******* plot armor superpower. And just to clarify it's not even a unique superpower just a very by the Numbers system.
3. Once again this book is the type what's the author says something about the main character which cannot be seen through the characters actions or thoughts, such as claiming that the character is an old man in a child's body. The points that was trying to be made was he was very mature or clever. News flash he isn't, he's very childish and it does not act the age expected of how old his soul is.
4. And also for people who don't like first person, I happen to be one of those people I still Tried reading cuz I heard the author was actually good (I was lied to), not only is this first person but she will randomly go into 3rd person and he simultaneously will a mix past tense and present tense.
5. The word usage is very fanfiction like, AKA it is limited it to the vocabulary of a fifth grader and it doesn't set any type of mood or feeling while reading the book.
6. They're also a whole bunch of other small things which could make this review 10 paper essay more well-thought-out than the book itself. Life wasted enough time on this :novel" as it already is.
Honestly I liked the first few chapters. After that its just keeps going down until chapter 18 when it became unreadable. After that I was just skipping
You can see the author just wanted to get to thet point fast and he didn’t care about how it got there.
The first two time skips were mean less and that’s 5 years. Even if he wanted to be low-key since the whole city know he could talk and walk and train when he was 1 year old it was useless.
His father already know he was special since birth but didn’t do anything. And that’s just the tip of the iceberg.
And that’s just the story development. Mind the shallow mc ,the useless guards and the sloppy power system in the world.
Everything about it was just really sloppy and disappointing
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
love the story, really entertaining so far...................................
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