The fragments of the divine crown - Reviews

Brother author kunThis story is still in my favourite list can you update it or show us the end in a way you like pleaseThe story is great

Voted because want to troll people ( already know this novel just another "creative" novel) and looking over angry mob now,it just worth it :g and five stars for the review angry mob shows

This novel is still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.

reading this book  am looking forward to seeing more interesting characters to the coming chapters

5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?5 chapters really?

you should add to the synopsis, it doesn't give you a hint/ taste of what the story is about. .................................................................................................................................................

Don’t abandon this one it’s coming along way smoother than most stories could.

"Slyph, wait up!" The cloaked man was the first to catch up with the elven ranger. The yellow light released by the torch on his left, only stretching as far as the elf in front. Ahead of that, he could not see anything else.

Everything seems so slow.

Once she was out of earshot Kallen turned to Ohgi.

Unfortunately, Kai spoke first before him. "Keith, what do the commoners sees us?"

She stripped off her clothes and put the uniform on while running over situations in her head that would make Alexander take this course of action.