The Fractured Path - Reviews

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Not bad.I can only rate 2.8 or 3 star. Novels are meant to be read so, can't help rate it. Fantasy is good and especially he existed since the creation  of all in myth.This kind of novel is my cup of tea and it is like tasting your favorite tea but the flavor is changed.

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I'm not reading this novel for one small reason. It's right there in the description: "Never comply with aristocrats or rich people". Wtf kind of idiotic belief is this? I can already see this mc besting up a small disciple from some glorious clan and somehow gaining the hate of the entire clan, where they would do everything in their power to kill him. When they try to kill him they'll somehow force him into some kind of fruitous encounter and after he's done harvesting that encounter he'll rush back to the sane clan and massacre them. This will happen throughough the entite novel and be the only plot that we'll see.

Read the first 10 chapters. Really not much to say about the novel... Pretty bad all around and these days there are so many much better sign in novels (80 years sign in, buddha's palm, turquoise pond just to name a few) It feels really pointless to bother with this.TQ - goodStory development - seems to be going in the direction of a harem which I personally don't like because most of the time it kind of consumes the other parts of the plot, which does indeed seem to happen here as well.Character design - There just aren't that many meaningful interactions between the characters. That part where he sneaked into the empress dowager's bedroom and ended up as her lover is odd at best, MC's main characteristic is lustful.World background - seems to be a somewhat normal cultivation world although not really. Most of these kinds of settings in other novels depict sects as overlords that reign over kingdoms and empires but here it seems to be somewhat different. In the first place, why would a sect want to conquer a kingdom? MC gets all kinds of sutras and techniques which sound cool but don't really seem necessary in relation to anything that's going on atm?... The cultivation system is super scuffed, nothing else notable.TL:DR - plenty of other novels that do the same job, 100 times better. Wouldn't recommend.

By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.

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The synopsis actually says it all. The novel is funny, witty, sometimes serious but great overall. Its been really long since i've read such a wholesome novel and that to an original. Kudos to the author ?

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What can I tell you, author? The story at first is pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is the way you rushed things. As soon as the MC wakes up, he runs through the forest, after running through the forest he meets the road where he gets on the bus that takes him back to the orphanage where the children who intimidate him kill him, why would you go back to the same place where they killed you? unanswered. After arriving at the orphanage, the MC is thrown to a military school in minutes where he is registered and it does not take long before he finds an arrogant boy whom the MC is going to kill in a few more chapters, or even go so far as to say that in the next chapter. In short, author, do not rush the story. Things are going too fast. Not even five chapters passed before the MC who is a cowardly boy turned into a cruel one. Yes, two months passed within the world of history, but for the MC and for us it was a matter of seconds.

Read the synopsis, it caught my interest,Read 10 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. I am going to continue reading it.. good storyline.. interesting plot.. writing style is very good. could not find mistakes.Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.

dews scenes are so good especially he does it so hard it makes me hot.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????