The Fractured Eternity - Reviews

Obviously I have to give myself 5 stars. To anyone reading this, thank you! I'm primarily writing because I want to, but sometimes that motivation runs out and randomly comes back. So if sometimes I randomly disappear for a few weeks... You know why.Also, I don't mind reviews if they're harsh and give me feedback/pointers, any are accepted! Side Note: This is the first novel I've ever written so it will be a rough ride, if you do end up sticking with me, thank you.

Seems fun lol …… Another book for single dreamers ?????.                                                                                    

Honest reviews are here.. If you love an OP MC, this novel is for you.. But, it is not toooooo OP.. MC can not wipe his opponent in one two shot or beat/fight two three higher realms than him.. MC can beat a few stages higher, but that it.. This novel title, "Binding to Geniuses to become Stronger" is exactly what this novel storyline is about.. MC will get stronger and stronger by binding himself with geniuses through the system.. As always, the system will reward MC for every mission quest..  Somehow, the author make most genius hide their name (ex: they do not introduce themselves when asking, and when MC ask other, they also don't tell him).. Well, MC need to know their name and meet them once (at least) to bind himself with genius through the system so, it understandable that the author won't let MC grow unlimited.. Plus, as you see, it only has 161 chapters, so kinda short.. The author might not have an idea how to expend his novel further..

theres no emotion or depth, its very bare. every chapter needs more. the chapter i just read "killers" felt flat. he broke their arms and legs, and chased after the ones who ran away just breaking their legs and disarming them. then sophia called the police and they left. that isnt word for word. but its pretty close. no fight scene. no drawn out police questions. the way it reads it was over in less than 5 minutes from start to them leaving. you could double or possibly even triple the length of this book with details.

Sorry to be so mean for my first review but I want the author to take conscience that his story is event more chidlish than my little poney. The mc has only one setbacks that he forgets in the first ten chapters that is his wife’s betrayal although the author could have used this to give the mc a more complex personality than «i love everyone, everyone is beautiful come with me pluck flower». He could have used this to create a more complex relationship with lu and his friends. Like he doesn’t trust any women and is a perfect bastards until he finds the female lead.The character of the stories are either here to help the mc either... Sorry there is only this sort of character.The mc is born :Rich (check)In a lovely family (check, btw i love you lu)With true friens (check)With insane luck (check, if one day he goes in a forest i expect him to at least found a unicorn)The things with stories with a system is that it makes all too easy there are no exterior problems that the mc won’t be able to take care of. So please create some real problem.

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The author, Starting of the Novel is quite interesting and intriguing. Honestly, I like this...Well, I want to give a 5-star rating but you know this is just starting therefore I can't give you one. But Novel Deserve it. I would appreciate it if you after posting the chapters, read them slowly and with focus so you can avoid any spelling mistakes or errors...It will be quite helpful and don't get offended because this is just advice.

"Why did you come here?" He signed.

"I want to leave mary goise "(Alex)

I wondered... about lots of things in this life. Family, friends, affections, things, life, love. I just couldn't seem to get it in the same way others felt it. My emotions were number at times and worse at times. I wondered if that was what being bipolar meant, but I had never had the chance to see a doctor on that matter. Still my random emotions that were always out of control bothered me. Dearly.

I let my tongue out and do a m/ ,

But the meteor men beg to differ