The Fractured Equinox (Elyndor Saga, Book I) - Reviews

I see great potential.. keep up the good work.

A little slow in the beginning, but it definitely picks up once you get past that initial slump. Really love how the MC takes multiple personas and positions to improve himself. Cant get enough of the story.

This novel is inferior to other novels,just an opinion for the time being likely to say that this need a efficient imagination inorder to have a quality essentialy to readers.

The story was good however the story was stopped and the last chapter really dodgy asking for people's information.It's a good novel but it is recommended to not read this novel as it is likely not to receive updates and remain the same.

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Liam "come on I will be very careful".

"I only plan to get back for the seven slaps because I see the drug is taking effect on you. Alas, you dare harm this cute creature and also led this chaos resulting in my Goodfellas lives." her ever intimidating aura gave everyone a goosebump.

"To say that nothing is true, is to realize that the foundations of society are fragile, and that we must be the shepherds of our own civilization. To say that everything is permitted, is to understand that we are the architects of our actions, and that we must live with their consequences, whether glorious or tragic."

Kingkong without waiting for the little creature below to answer, swinging his arm into the small creature below him.

"I get that maybe I messed up—maybe this is all my fault because I shouldn't have been thinking about you like that anyway. I shouldn't have—but after you hopped into my shower the first time because I was taking too long...I don't know hyung—it kind of turned me on, I guess. And I know it's wrong, but you looked pretty fucking hot and I'm just a teenage boy that needs a release at some point and—shit, I'm sorry if I upset you but I'm fucking tired of you avoiding me. Even the others can tell that something is up between us now!"

I am Kai. Pochinki Kai. Odd name yes. Never figured out it's meaning myself, haha. I consider myself intelligent. After all I got into the Hanyang University in Seoul. I've been born and brought up in Seoul. Currently twenty five and studying medicine in my University. My girlfriend, Kusagi Kinata, ranked number one in the national test for Hanyang University and the same age as me and in the same course.